onemorecup
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- Posted: Sat, 22 Sep 2012 07:10:56 +0000
i'm trying to write poetry again. probably i am terrible, so i welcome anything anyone has to say to improve the way i'm writing. here it is. untitled poems are like babies you didn't care enough to name, these are some of my b*****d children.
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once again i am a bishop
revisiting a borrowed room
with chessboard floors.
so finding myself in a place
that feels so much like home
my feet tingle and want to step forward,
but i can't, so i slide diagonally
away from the old spit bonfires
the spirits in cheap dimestore cups
the red gummy smiles from the natives
that seem more like sneers to me.
outside this tiled room there's a whole town
waiting to tell me if i didn't move away
nothing would have changed.
pawns can only inch forward which is what my old school friends did
now they live in a trailer if their mothers are lucky
but they sparkle they make sure of that
comb the sand from their hair and just let it fall
wherever it will.
nostalgia seeps its way through my feet-
when they hit the cold linoleum
i get a jolt that smells like wet cement at night
when we were walking downhill to the beach
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once again i am a bishop
revisiting a borrowed room
with chessboard floors.
so finding myself in a place
that feels so much like home
my feet tingle and want to step forward,
but i can't, so i slide diagonally
away from the old spit bonfires
the spirits in cheap dimestore cups
the red gummy smiles from the natives
that seem more like sneers to me.
outside this tiled room there's a whole town
waiting to tell me if i didn't move away
nothing would have changed.
pawns can only inch forward which is what my old school friends did
now they live in a trailer if their mothers are lucky
but they sparkle they make sure of that
comb the sand from their hair and just let it fall
wherever it will.
nostalgia seeps its way through my feet-
when they hit the cold linoleum
i get a jolt that smells like wet cement at night
when we were walking downhill to the beach