Untitled (( CC = I wrote a cliche love poem x.x))

[The rebel prince!]

Oh bloody hell, what a thing to do ><''. I need help, please tell me anything is amiss. I need this to be perfect for her, to convey my feelings -insert sappy music here- heart gonk


a saffron rush
heathered eyes
pattering around

its real
that polyphonic perception
---dilating my eyes royal indigo

like a ton of atoms
shatters; breaks
from her lips

something lovely
smeared over with yellow
---parachute of the stars

of radiance?
her body casts

strung out
tacked on the wall
till she snuck by

her caramel hair
dances to and fro
burning holes in my heart

the sun finally came out
caressing her face
how lucky he is

[The rebel prince!]

gonk

[The rebel prince!]

I live in the northeast

I watch public televesion


so I must be right x.x

[The last Decepticon]

Beautiful_Day

I live in the northeast

I watch public televesion


so I must be right x.x

Indeed you are..... eek

[Phreya]

Wow... I love the descriptions, the mood... It's a gorgeous poem. It's one of those wierd ones that I always liked. *laughs* Fantastic job, my friend. wink

[The rebel prince!]

zero the last decepticon

Beautiful_Day

I live in the northeast

I watch public televesion


so I must be right x.x

Indeed you are..... eek

call the south ******** ;O

[The rebel prince!]

Phreya

Wow... I love the descriptions, the mood... It's a gorgeous poem. It's one of those wierd ones that I always liked. *laughs* Fantastic job, my friend. wink

all my poems are odd :O

if they arent, I know they are not complete

thanks heart

[Phreya]

Beautiful_Day

all my poems are odd :O

if they arent, I know they are not complete

thanks heart

*bows* Of course. Ah, oddness is good. *laughs*

[The rebel prince!]

My soul tis dark
bleeding down my head
my life is a razor blade

-snaps fingers- :B


emotastic to the max!10101 one zero one

[The last Decepticon]

Beautiful_Day

My soul tis dark
bleeding down my head
on a grassy battlefield

-snaps fingers- :B

emolicious to the max!

Why are you doing this? xp

[The rebel prince!]

zero the last decepticon

Beautiful_Day

My soul tis dark
bleeding down my head
on a grassy battlefield

-snaps fingers- :B

emolicious to the max!

Why are you doing this? xp

cus I wondered if anyone would say "Great work"

guess you were too ticky for meh gonk

[The last Decepticon]

Beautiful_Day

zero the last decepticon

Beautiful_Day

My soul tis dark
bleeding down my head
on a grassy battlefield

-snaps fingers- :B

emolicious to the max!

Why are you doing this? xp

cus I wondered if anyone would say "Great work"

guess you were too ticky for meh gonk

I try. eek