Kmaster666
(?)Community Member
- Posted: Fri, 24 Feb 2012 02:20:31 +0000
Heyo, folks just hoping for general feedback and criticism, this is the first thing iv everr wrote:
I down another bottle, its a mystery why I keep slipping in misery, feels like im history, holding onto to a glimpse, god damn I wish, i wish I couldve seen what the imps be doin to my brain,filled it with pain, thoughts of going insane, I got sick playing this game, I couldnt stomach another drop, now im back again, fight my way to the top. The syrup is a stirup trying to mix it up, I pop a pill now im king of the hill, what comes up must come down,Its a long way to fall, no hand holds, back down th bottom, im a phantom no one knows im there but good God please beware, it wont be long till im floating and gliding and sliping and sliding having a good time, robotically electronically, not individually,no sense of will, ******** man I will kill, spill blood, cause a flood wash away the hurt bury it in the dirt. Cussin and fussin, reachin for the tussin, Im back again, forcefed this s**t, I cant swallow. Docter man this is my gallows, strung up, torn up, I slipped up, cant take another cup, but I just might, gotta have something to get me through the night, and in the height of my delerium im staring down the barrel of a gun cocked, locked and ready to flow, blow, both barrels, parallel hole, straight through,blood stains on the wall im begining to fall, darkness clouds over, my vision iss slower, I just dont know...Tussin oh Tussin why must we be fussing over your blessing, light up my night, Tussin oh Tussin
I down another bottle, its a mystery why I keep slipping in misery, feels like im history, holding onto to a glimpse, god damn I wish, i wish I couldve seen what the imps be doin to my brain,filled it with pain, thoughts of going insane, I got sick playing this game, I couldnt stomach another drop, now im back again, fight my way to the top. The syrup is a stirup trying to mix it up, I pop a pill now im king of the hill, what comes up must come down,Its a long way to fall, no hand holds, back down th bottom, im a phantom no one knows im there but good God please beware, it wont be long till im floating and gliding and sliping and sliding having a good time, robotically electronically, not individually,no sense of will, ******** man I will kill, spill blood, cause a flood wash away the hurt bury it in the dirt. Cussin and fussin, reachin for the tussin, Im back again, forcefed this s**t, I cant swallow. Docter man this is my gallows, strung up, torn up, I slipped up, cant take another cup, but I just might, gotta have something to get me through the night, and in the height of my delerium im staring down the barrel of a gun cocked, locked and ready to flow, blow, both barrels, parallel hole, straight through,blood stains on the wall im begining to fall, darkness clouds over, my vision iss slower, I just dont know...Tussin oh Tussin why must we be fussing over your blessing, light up my night, Tussin oh Tussin