-Still writing-

[Narcotic Cupcake]

I'll tell you a story of how it all began
A story how I relied on a blade
A story of why I kept going back to it again
How I was unhappy when the scars did fade

When I made a mark
I didn't care who I hurt
While I was drowning in the dark
I felt lower than dirt

Not much has really changed
I hide my scars afraid
Afraid of being labeled as deranged
For truely loving my blade







(PS I don't know what to add but I am going to add more also I think it would be fun to co-write a poem so if anyone is interested please PM me....)

[Miao_Kitty]

actually i like it just the way it is

[Narcotic Cupcake]

Miao_Kitty

actually i like it just the way it is

Thanks I just want to make it a tad longer...so it kinda ends -shrugs-

[Miao_Kitty]

Trinity_Despair

Miao_Kitty

actually i like it just the way it is

Thanks I just want to make it a tad longer...so it kinda ends -shrugs-

hmm maybe add something in the middle? - like before the last verse but after the first two..

[Miao_Kitty]

ooh ooh i totally got it - u should write more about ur experiences w/ your blade and then put the "changed" verse at the end. more different scenarios or somethin