TheDucksKeepMarchingOn
I just want to start off by saying that I love love love your poetry!
I would suggest focusing a bit more on how you want it to be read. While poetry is not subject to grammar rules the same way other forms of writing are, the way someone would read it in their head is the same. By leaving out punctuation or leaving it ambiguous as is to where you sentences end (or even if there are any at all) it makes the brain stumble over the poem. I would suggest that if you are having trouble figuring out where periods and things go, write out the poem as a paragraph and read it as you would want others to. Then go through and punctuate the original accordingly.
Thank you for commenting uwu
I usually write very quickly and I almost never read the whole poem over before declaring it finished (for some reason? I don't recommend doing it lmao). I will work on that and my punctuation, though.
Thanks again ye