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[[too good to be true]]
i was falling for you so hard
you caught me off my guard
you're just a trick of the rainy mist
i fell for someone who didnt exist

i was afraid to get too close
my heart as delicate as a rose
i was afraid to break it
afraid you'd disappear like a ghost

your words of deceit broke my heart
went through me like a poisoned dart
like a knife it cut me deep
i shouldve known right from the start

i gave you my heart and soul
my emotions were out of my control
i gave you everything i had
but you left me empty and cold

you broke my heart for the first time
it was hard to start a new beginning
i thought i could call you mine
i dont know what i was thinking

[chorus]
it was too good to be true
too good to last
i saw clear waters shine blue
and i gave you my trust
i saw a teardrop sparkle red
the colour of love
the colour of hate
i saw one heart made by two
i shouldve known it was too good to be true
[end of chorus]

you were lying to me
it was love times two
you were two-timing me
i was in misery

the day the sky turned a misty grey-
the day my heart didnt feel okay
i caught a glimpse of paradise
i saw the flaws in all your lies

you broke my heart for the last time
it was hard to start anew
i had to draw a line
i lost my faith in you

[chorus]

i fell for a mirage
only a mirage
you're just a trick of the rainy mist
i fell for someone who didnt exist

[chorus]

too good to be true
saw clear waters shine blue
saw a teardrop sparkle red
the colour of hate
....
end.
its on a scale of one to ten. thx!
10 biggrin i like the fact u use the metaphor of a mirage n sumthing that didnt exist *applauds*
I love you closing, it's like uber perfect^^ I give it a 10
thx!! im working on another piece..hope youll give me your comments as well when its done!! biggrin
Fits my mood. Would know better if heard with music. Not bad. 7.
thx..the tune has a medium tempo..quite a sad song..full of emotion..its not recorded...but hopefully it will be... smile
heartof_ice
thx..the tune has a medium tempo..quite a sad song..full of emotion..its not recorded...but hopefully it will be... smile
I'd liek to hear it.
yea..maybe i'll try to record it and upload it on the net...
that'd be cool
yeps.. biggrin
any more comments? theyd be greatly appreciated! heart
thanx! 3nodding

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