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Post: 4670314_1 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:14:01 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:14:01 +0000

when i saw you todat,
i melted down,
i love the way,
you laugh and smile,
i wanted to say,
i'm gonna drown,
every day,
for quite a while,
for my life i pray,
to free from being bound,
someday i may,
have the heart of a child,
when i saw you today.

since not very many r mostlikely gonna read this anyway, im a boy and this is for my love.... whee

so?

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Post: 4670314_2 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:15:48 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:15:48 +0000

One topic is enough, thanks.

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Post: 4670314_3 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:19:48 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:19:48 +0000

what do u mean?

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Post: 4670314_4 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:24:47 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:24:47 +0000

You posted two topics, both with the same title and the same poem.

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Post: 4670314_5 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:27:26 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:27:26 +0000

Ugh, Gaia must have been messed up. Now I'm thinking that you didn't mean to.

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Post: 4670314_6 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:38:20 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:38:20 +0000

i didnt mean 2 but i did, i screwd up, o well i dont like this poem anyway

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Post: 4670314_7 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:39:38 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:39:38 +0000

it makes me sick kinda......lol

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Post: 4670314_8 created on Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:42:56 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 Nov 2004 02:42:56 +0000

The same thing happened to me. ^_^

Nice poem, by the way. How long have you been writing poetry?

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