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[Aoki Mie]

If you can find the time, please read my current poems here. That is, if you want as well. Thank you!

And just for the kicks, I've written a fresh one for this post lol emotion_awesome

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The point of deception is to leave a great impression.
Many don't agree that that's how a person comes to be.
Especially when they've unconsciously become what others come from.
From the denial and lies spitted to another mouth,
we've grown into ourselves,
whether or not others learn to accept it themselves.

Born to want what others so easily flaunt,
i've come to a decision.
This will not be my vision
of my present nor future.

Although I may want to build an image
I will separate the bridge that started to encourage
what should never have been fed so easily to the minds of those who want an advantage.

I may have been raised to be such a character,
but never will I be the next carrier
to spread the spit into another mouth
just so I could stay proud.
Such impression is merely an infection
that will never enshroud.


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my poetry is so weird but i do love to rhyme so much! >_<

[KrisKitKat]

Good job! I love how it rhymes without repeating the same words and portrays the emotions. I'm impressed. I also have a wattpad account 3nodding btw I read the poems in your blog and wow. I'm blown away

[Aoki Mie]

KrisKitKat

Good job! I love how it rhymes without repeating the same words and portrays the emotions. I'm impressed. I also have a wattpad account 3nodding btw I read the poems in your blog and wow. I'm blown away

Thank you so much! I didn't want to repeat as much haha my words are pretty over used though. You have a wattpad? Nice! Maybe I can read your own work if you have any smile I'm so happy you think that way about my poems. It means a lot TuT

[Aoki Mie]

Cageless

Aoki Mie

I made a blog even though I already own a wattpad to post my poetry in. If you can find the time, please read my favorites that I wrote here. That is, if you want as well. Thank you!

And just for the kicks, I've written a fresh one for this post lol emotion_awesome

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The point of deception is to leave a great impression.
Many don't agree that that's how a person comes to be.
Especially when they've unconsciously become what others come from.
From the denial and lies spitted to another mouth,
we've grown into ourselves,
whether or not others learn to accept it themselves.

Born to want what others so easily flaunt,
i've come to a decision.
This will not be my vision
of my present nor future.

Although I may want to build an image
I will separate the bridge that started to encourage
what should never have been fed so easily to the minds of those who want an advantage.

I may have been raised to be such a character,
but never will I be the next carrier
to spread the spit into another mouth
just so I could stay proud.
Such impression is merely an infection
that will never enshroud.


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my poetry is so weird but i do love to rhyme so much! >_<

Wooooow. =D
Outside of the poem's form, I'm happy to hear these words ^_^
Into it, however, wow again! Very very well done.
Is this a certain style? I love that you didn't cut it up, but also have not gone on adding too much.
Wow, wow, great work! I'll check your poems out, too. I have to go right now though.

Oh my gosh! Thank you <3 that means so much! /. I don't necessarily have a style. I just write haha But really thank you~ I hope you like them as well and its totally fine whenever you are able. They are just a few. Sorry for replying late by the way. I've been at gone ^^'