PLEASE COMMENT ON MY NEW SONG!!!!!!

[Gaurdians_Fall]

hey people ive finished writing a new song today and i want to get opinions on it what do you think of it?

all your replies are very much appreciated and thank you biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin


Feels like love
(guitar intro)
This is such a strange feeling,
That i have,
remembering old times and a little sad,
falling and falling there is no end,
waiting and waiting for my message to send,

give me help i need you,
give me help i want you,
give me help and save me
its all i can do,
to see this go through
my heart is alone with no other home~~(extended note)
(guitar)

this is such a strange feeling,
that i have,
being with you no longer bad,
falling and falling you caught me instead,
waiting and waiting like I’m crazy in the head

give me love i need you
give me love i want you
give me love and save me
it’s all you can do
to see this go through
my heart lies with yours opening locked doors~~(extended note)

(guitar solo)

this is such a strange feeling,
that i have,
memories, tears and a little mad,
falling and falling the floor hurt so bad,
waiting and waiting no message had,

give it up its no use,
give it up we will just lose,
give it up don’t save me
its all we can do
to watch this fall through
my heart isn’t there and you don’t even care~~(extended note)

(guitar)

this is such i strange feeling that i have
weeping with sorrow you must be too,
falling and falling away from you
waiting and waiting
im waiting and waiting
im waiting and waiting so nothings new

give it up....
give it up....
give it up....
its all i can do,
to walk away from you,
you ripped out my heart when you told me that lie~~(extended note)

(guitar solo)

so me and you
me and you
me and you
we...are....through~~(extended note)

(guitar ending)


and thats it please please please comment XDDDDDDDDDDD

[Cheza lunar wolf]

i love the song but wish you sing it tho ^. ^