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Sticky: [ Poll ] PL's Peak: Guide to Poetry and Critique (feedback/discuss!)

Why are you here?

I'm here for the poetry guide! 0.43325791855204 43.3% [ 383 ]
I'm here for the critiquing guide! 0.19796380090498 19.8% [ 175 ]
I'm here because someone else pointed me here. 0.066742081447964 6.7% [ 59 ]
I'm here for the gold. Didn't it say it had a poll? 0.30203619909502 30.2% [ 267 ]
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Post: 27141949_316 created on Sun May 10, 2009 12:02 pmPosted: Sun May 10, 2009 12:02 pm
came up with this thing
had to scribble on this thread
now i smell like s**t
 
     
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Post: 27141949_317 created on Tue May 12, 2009 6:29 pmPosted: Tue May 12, 2009 6:29 pm
 
Heh, even your avatar looks like scat. ^ ^
     
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Post: 27141949_318 created on Thu May 14, 2009 1:12 amPosted: Thu May 14, 2009 1:12 am
I stopped caring about ten months ago, when my account with the best items got arbitrarily banhammered.


Nice to see you're still alive, Che.
 
     
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Cry on and on, Come back to me,
Come back, in a few days.

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Post: 27141949_319 created on Fri May 29, 2009 2:56 amPosted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:56 am
 
this thread sucks. and pisses me off
     
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Post: 27141949_320 created on Sat May 30, 2009 3:31 amPosted: Sat May 30, 2009 3:31 am
out casted loser
this thread sucks. and pisses me off
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
 
     
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Post: 27141949_322 created on Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:40 amPosted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:40 am
 
-blink- Wow, got to page ten and decided to make a comment. Page 22, and it's fallen apart.

Y'know, sometimes I wish people'd actually give me feedback. Even at school, my English teacher has 400 poems to read, so as long as I get my poem turned in, I get a 100 and 'Awesome' scrawled across the top. I never get real critique for poems, even the ones I put a lot of work into.
     
TY for the Holy Gauntlets, Lerrx! ^_^

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Post: 27141949_323 created on Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:18 amPosted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:18 am
bump
 
     
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Post: 27141949_324 created on Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:53 amPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 10:53 am
 
i have to hurry to lunch right now but i've gotta say,XtReMeLy helpful thread you've got here. heart the advice. smile
     

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Post: 27141949_325 created on Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:05 pmPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:05 pm
very interesting.. 3nodding biggrin smile
 
     
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Post: 27141949_326 created on Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:09 amPosted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:09 am
 
meximule wuz heer
     
signatures, schmignatures
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Post: 27141949_327 created on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:00 pmPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:00 pm
Wise Phyllo
this thread sucks. and pisses me off


Y'know, I...Nevermind.

i am evilmaster90
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eek


rofl rofl rofl
 
     
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Post: 27141949_328 created on Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:28 pmPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:28 pm
 
zero the last decepticon
Y'know, I...Nevermind.



Your mother? Yeah, we know dipshit.
     
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Post: 27141949_329 created on Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:50 pmPosted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:50 pm
Neliel Tu Oderschvankk
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Y'know, I...Nevermind.



Your mother? Yeah, we know dipshit.


I bleach my pubes for you, Nel!
 
     
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Post: 27141949_330 created on Thu Sep 24, 2009 11:09 pmPosted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 11:09 pm
 
Drunkenantix
Neliel Tu Oderschvankk
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Y'know, I...Nevermind.



Your mother? Yeah, we know dipshit.


I bleach my pubes for you, Nel!


It's when you start bleaching your a*****e that you've gone too far.
     
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