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I've learned that it's usually best to not revise immediately after one critique (unless you agree with that after reading it from their point of view). If, however, you get the same/similar comments from other people's critiques, then you should probably think of revising the said part.

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I've learned that it's usually best to not revise immediately after one critique (unless you agree with that after reading it from their point of view). If, however, you get the same/similar comments from other people's critiques, then you should probably think of revising the said part.

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That's actually a really good point, too. It kind of calls back to "if only one person just isn't getting it, yeah it's probably their problem. If no one but the author understands what's going on, it's probably pretty opaque."

Johnny xFATHOMx
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Yes! heart

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Someday, Johnny and I will get a sticky! Someday.


But I will never forget you. Mostly because I'm still right here, you doof. wink

Astaire
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Thanks, hon. heart
 
     
 
Lol. I wanted to just edit our crit thread, since I think you're a step above us (and much differnt in method), yet it's already so long...I don't know what to do! I just figured i'd give you a break from our thread, since it's pretty much me and Johnny running the show.

YOU GOT YOUR OWN WORLD TO THINK ABOUT

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yeah, but then it wouldn't be the TRIumvirate. and we need SOMEONE to balance us.
 
     
 
Ganapati
P.L HAS MOVED ON FROM US crying

Someday, Johnny and I will get a sticky! Someday.
you're a sticky in my heart, gana. redface
     
Johnny xFATHOMx
yeah, but then it wouldn't be the TRIumvirate. and we need SOMEONE to balance us.

I KNOW. crying

Er, balance?

I was thinking of just making a new thread. I mean, our thread is pretty popular, even if it's just the two of us. A lot of poets on here have a hard time getting a decent crit without all the a**-kissing. rolleyes
 
     
 
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Ganapati
P.L HAS MOVED ON FROM US crying

Someday, Johnny and I will get a sticky! Someday.
you're a sticky in my heart, gana. redface


Why do people keep wanting to cast me out? crying

Though we should probably move back on-topic. >_>
     
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Ganapati
P.L HAS MOVED ON FROM US crying

Someday, Johnny and I will get a sticky! Someday.
you're a sticky in my heart, gana. redface

Haha, awwwww. 4laugh

Did I tell you guys I printed out something he wrote for me? whee
 
     
 
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Ganapati
P.L HAS MOVED ON FROM US crying

Someday, Johnny and I will get a sticky! Someday.
you're a sticky in my heart, gana. redface


Why do people keep wanting to cast me out? crying

Though we should probably move back on-topic. >_>

WHET DO YOU MEEEAN P.L AND YER NEW PRETTY NOSE RING 4laugh
     
Agreed.

Meet you at the lurve. 4laugh
 
     

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Ganapati
Johnny xFATHOMx
yeah, but then it wouldn't be the TRIumvirate. and we need SOMEONE to balance us.

I KNOW. crying

Er, balance?

I was thinking of just making a new thread. I mean, our thread is pretty popular, even if it's just the two of us. A lot of poets on here have a hard time getting a decent crit without all the a**-kissing. rolleyes
xd

when i'm in a hurry to get something critiqued i go to PL's critique thread.
     
Congrats on the new sticky, PL.
 
     
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