New Poetry PLZ rate!!!

[rikkoneko]

Poetry,
a word that to most is just a noun,
to many that have not found,
the meaning of its glorious sound.
But the poet is losing it the fastest,
forgeting it its our job to open eyes of the masses,
and get them off thier asses,
to fight against all faciasts.
The modern poet is think of way to rhyme,
while wasting time,
searching for what he can't find,
forgeting to put meaning in his lines,
and inspiring the readers mind.
With many calling poetry "soft",
because media has goene through much cost,
to cover the average mind in frost,
leaving them mentally and emotionally lost.
Minds I intend to save,
filling up thier mental caves,
and releasing all of the media's slaves.
Making all see,
that from emotion we must not flee,
and giving you the key,
to set your mind free.

[Petboy4]

To me that sound great.

[Admiral Von Radioactivity]

This belongs in the "Original Poetry/Lyricism" subforum. it has been reported and will be moved there soon.

[The Lobster Queen]

This belongs in the poetry subforum.

[Raincrow]

Poetry Subforum.

[rikkoneko]

its not really one of my best but i really like it... it really shows some view that i have on young poets