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My heart is broke bcoz of someone being so jerk
Hurting my feelings so strong
And never have a guts to explain what is wrong
Making me feel such a fool
Making me hes tool
Forgetting him should be easy
Even though it makes my heart so dizzy
How stupid am I for being this crazy
Knowing I'm nothing but just another dolly
I know love no needs of return
That's why I let go and be this thorn
Well, There are some major grammar issues. Such as "hes" should be "his" and so on.
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I think you should be paying more attention in English class. Learn basic grammar and sentence structure before you start writing poetry.
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Well, There are some major grammar issues. Such as "hes" should be "his" and so on.


sorry its just I just want to right my feelings down I don't care whether the grammar is wrong and etc. just want this all out of my chest...



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Corrie Wazlib
I think you should be paying more attention in English class. Learn basic grammar and sentence structure before you start writing poetry.



Sorry if it was like that I'm really am heartbroken so I don't edit nor read my poem again to right the wrong grammars and everything. I just let it be like that coz my heart really is so broke.....

Just want it all off my chest....

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