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here we go. final ;D hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it

Before you sits a broken man. A fragile pinkish heart in hand.
Peculiar how it can hurt so bad while love is only in the mind.
I miss you every time autumn comes around. It's like you visit me for a full season.
And the memories of you are as vivid as autumn leaves.
Your red lips, the yellow reminds me of your blonde hair, your eyes as hazel as autumn's essence.
That have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
And not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlight winter night.
Those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer but they spoke those cold words even though I saw your beautiful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice.
And the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was because every word hurt just as much.
Felt like I would die, I couldn't stand the pain. I felt myself slipping away.
A knife up to your throat for one put through my heart.
I often think back to that night, the moment when I found out that our love was a lie.
Yellow sirens flashing like when the wind blows through autumn leaves.
The dusk always coloring the memories.
The dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze.
And the leaves still haunt me, like ghosts in Halloween.
The wind still whispers your name, and like jack-o-lanterns I carve myself a smile.
But just like that you left me once again.
Summers of love fade into autumns of regret.
I know I need to learn to adapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
But the pain is too tense, this scar still itches, this broken heart still beats for your pulse.
My eyes still long for autumn's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false.
Because seasons change, rearrange, as bright green leaves turn yellow, red, and brown see autumn caught 'em and all those leaves must fall down.
Dirtflake
here we go. final ;D hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it

Before you sits a broken man. A fragile pinkish heart in hand.
Peculiar how it can hurt so bad while love is only in the mind.
I miss you every time autumn comes around. It's like you visit me for a full season.
And the memories of you are as vivid as autumn leaves.
Your red lips, the yellow reminds me of your blonde hair, your eyes as hazel as autumn's essence.
That have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
And not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlight winter night.
Those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer but they spoke those cold words even though I saw your beautiful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice.
And the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was because every word hurt just as much.
Felt like I would die, I couldn't stand the pain. I felt myself slipping away.
A knife up to your throat for one put through my heart.
I often think back to that night, the moment when I found out that our love was a lie.
Yellow sirens flashing like when the wind blows through autumn leaves.
The dusk always coloring the memories.
The dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze.
And the leaves still haunt me, like ghosts in Halloween.
The wind still whispers your name, and like jack-o-lanterns I carve myself a smile.
But just like that you left me once again.
Summers of love fade into autumns of regret.
I know I need to learn to adapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
But the pain is too tense, this scar still itches, this broken heart still beats for your pulse.
My eyes still long for autumn's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false.
Because seasons change, rearrange, as bright green leaves turn yellow, red, and brown see autumn caught 'em and all those leaves must fall down.
Its amazing! emotion_kirakira
Trixi Malice
Dirtflake
here we go. final ;D hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it

Before you sits a broken man. A fragile pinkish heart in hand.
Peculiar how it can hurt so bad while love is only in the mind.
I miss you every time autumn comes around. It's like you visit me for a full season.
And the memories of you are as vivid as autumn leaves.
Your red lips, the yellow reminds me of your blonde hair, your eyes as hazel as autumn's essence.
That have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
And not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlight winter night.
Those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer but they spoke those cold words even though I saw your beautiful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice.
And the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was because every word hurt just as much.
Felt like I would die, I couldn't stand the pain. I felt myself slipping away.
A knife up to your throat for one put through my heart.
I often think back to that night, the moment when I found out that our love was a lie.
Yellow sirens flashing like when the wind blows through autumn leaves.
The dusk always coloring the memories.
The dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze.
And the leaves still haunt me, like ghosts in Halloween.
The wind still whispers your name, and like jack-o-lanterns I carve myself a smile.
But just like that you left me once again.
Summers of love fade into autumns of regret.
I know I need to learn to adapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
But the pain is too tense, this scar still itches, this broken heart still beats for your pulse.
My eyes still long for autumn's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false.
Because seasons change, rearrange, as bright green leaves turn yellow, red, and brown see autumn caught 'em and all those leaves must fall down.
Its amazing! emotion_kirakira


thanks
Sasuke no Katon's avatar

Sparkly Lunatic

I sent you my lyric. <3 But all the other replies about this are amazing~ <3 Mine feels small in comparason... D:
Ikuo Jinichi's avatar

Friendly Friend

Trixi Malice
Hello my name is Trixi
I'm no good at writing
So I want to put out this request
For a dark poem about young love in the autumn.
I want it like a tragic opera.
I'll pay if you want,
just tell me how much you want.
Thanks!


I suppose I'll give it a try,
people like to rhyme an answer,
I'm not really sure why..... wait.... s**t.
Ikuo Jinichi's avatar

Friendly Friend

Trixi Malice
Hello my name is Trixi
I'm no good at writing
So I want to put out this request
For a dark poem about young love in the autumn.
I want it like a tragic opera.
I'll pay if you want,
just tell me how much you want.
Thanks!


Orange leaves sweep quickly across my face,
Staring at the stars that don't love me,
A flavorful darkness so close that I can taste,
Even though blood is all around me.

I nod my head to the right,
I see her lying down,
So cold at the sight,
All I can do is just frown,

All of this is so shocking
Memories can't stop stalking,
Please God, give me more time,
I never said that I wanted to die...

But at least we died together right?~



Haha, I didn't really go 100%, I'm not very good at those kind of dark poem themes.
But enjoy.
Rarurie's avatar

Dapper Bloodsucker

Hello my name is Raru
I'm no good at writing, too
But your request teased me so
And I just can never say 'no'
I shall describe this 'orange lament'
Filled with words , thought and senses
But surely it costs no dime
Because you already paid me time
Quote me if you want this to begin
Or else just let my words dwindl'
this thread is breaking OP/L rules/guidelines. just letting you guys know in case the thread gets Recycle Binned.
I thought your prompt was interesting, and I had an interesting idea, so I wrote up a short draft.

Curtain up
Leaves are down
A beautiful wash of light
A stage
colored in red and yellow dapples

It is a performance on a park bench
Two perfects
feign flaws
Yet their voices leave no secret
Natural as their setting
Just as pristine.

Like a record
Their songs are peppered
with dry crackles
blowing in the wind
Hear the warmth
Keep it close as winter nears

Curtain falls

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