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Hello my name is Trixi
I'm no good at writing
So I want to put out this request
For a dark poem about young love in the autumn.
I want it like a tragic opera.
I'll pay if you want,
just tell me how much you want.
Thanks!
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id never make someone pay its a gift to me to write,
plus it sucks lol i wrote it a long time ago

Mellow is the sun
dying in my eyes
freezing is the night
though it is relaxing to my whys
I miss the dusks array
with its few hopeful memories of the day
though the night is quite vicious for fraying my straying insight
I feel still
yet quite alive
with a new sense of pride
like an animal i stride
for at night I feel wise
without the sun asking me why
the street lights are a pleasent surprise
and the moons brightness is soon to arise

the dawn is dawning to me
bleak and weary soon ill be
as i see the sun
it always tries
to antagonize me with pleading curiousity
so of course its no mystery
as to why i miss the night

the dusks wading through me
wave after wave a colorful sea
an ocean to behold
with clouds as the foam
oh how i love waiting,
only for the night
watching the ocean melt and freeze
is scary as can be
but a rush it does seem indeed
as the depths of the ocean bleed through
within me i feel the kiss of the breeze
and as i sink
I fall in love with the veiw

the cold is so fresh
its always like new
the roads are so dark
it leaves mysterious vibes from the stark
its a beauty like no other
the land feels like my brother
we let go of each others hand
at the first kiss of dew
so that i can sleep
and dream of that dark blue
i know that one things true
with the stars so dear
i will miss you
Peace Love Unity Respect
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im sorry if its not what your looking for, what do u think ?
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Nimble Student

Trixi Malice
Hello my name is Trixi
I'm no good at writing
So I want to put out this request
For a dark poem about young love in the autumn.
I want it like a tragic opera.
I'll pay if you want,
just tell me how much you want.
Thanks!
I'll give it a try
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Nimble Student

Trixi Malice

I
Chalice of wrath that is full of grimace
Slowly but surely unwinding the lace
A heart full of love with a blinding daze
Trapped in the pursuit of this tragic maze
II
Light cease to exist on this found darkness
With a silver tongue there is a madness
The autumn lights are misty with sadness
Naked reality clothed with baldness...


PM me if you want me to continue it ^^
Seriphina The Great
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im sorry if its not what your looking for, what do u think ?
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Its beautiful!
Eponine I Thenardier
Trixi Malice

I
Chalice of wrath that is full of grimace
Slowly but surely unwinding the lace
A heart full of love with a blinding daze
Trapped in the pursuit of this tragic maze
II
Light cease to exist on this found darkness
With a silver tongue there is a madness
The autumn lights are misty with sadness
Naked reality clothed with baldness...


PM me if you want me to continue it ^^

Wow that is really good biggrin
challange accepted!! (give me a week i work)
I only want about 400 mabye I'd take 200 for it...
If it's not what your looking for I understand, I can also change the names to were it fits you. PM me if you want me to change the names



Although my soul is black my eyes are harmless brown. I always feel my nose touching the ground

I might be white but I'm far from clean, mabye you can get me like no one got me
but baby you cought me when I was most down

May my soul be an it and so am I

but cody don't make me cry
too bad you already did more damage than beyond repair, I sometimes wish you wernt ever there

But I'd do it all again knowing who you really are

you're halve my heart

halve my soul

you're more than you'll ever get to know

You could call it pethetic but I'll never regret it, because baby you cought me when I was most down
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Lunatic

Trixi Malice

Here's a go at it

Tears flow down the stained
transparent gaze of the sun.
It rolls over droplets, glittering
in daylight, rolling bigger
- like a snowball.
[ I wonder how it does
that accumulating bond.]

It falls from this invisible
plating- shimmering,
then flattens out
rejoining others of its kind.
[Where do they go
after they bind in that moment?]

Its glitters darken,
the shape - lost.
Where is it now?

Away it is hidden,
In the beauty of its kind.
From there, it

disappears.
They met on the day his brother died
a body hanging from the tree
like the only leaf
that hadn't fallen down

He had only gone out
to get some air
to quiet his mind
to try and feel again
she was there

Sitting in the tree
dressed in white
like a spirit of winter
a snow drop
on her dress
was one spot
of red

They looked at each other
he didnt know why she was there
and she didnt know why he was there

The forest breathed
the naked branches moved
and the carpet of leafs
rustled as they jostled
together like the tides
of the sea before becoming
still and silent again

You look lost
she said
and maybe sad

No reply
he stared into her
eyes of blue

This was not love
this was pain
He didn't need to eat
or sleep
if she lay down on her branch
and told him
you can nourish yourself
on my skin
my bones
feast
he would be no more alive

Without speaking she told him
to climb the tree
and sit next to her
without speaking he did
the only sound was his hand
gripping the branch
and his shoes
scraping gently against bark
like a blank face that neither
frowned or smiled

They sat next to each other
in the tree
and held hands
he..

a chinese burn
the girl gave him
a chinese burn
to take him by suprise
to make him feel something
to bring him back to life
it didnt work he didnt react
at all
and then somehow
her lips found their way onto his lips
or his lips found their way onto her lips
and from each others
different souls they sipped
and carresed and slipped
into the bliss of a
sweet sweet kiss
until he began to run his
fingers through her hair
and his other hand
touched the red spot
on her soft white dress

As leafs fall from trees
there is a moment
like a snip
in time
when the leaf has left the branch
the exact same moment is in a kiss
when once together lips
find themselves apart

The moment her lips left his
or his lips left hers
he realised and she realised
that he still couldn't feel
she was there
and she was gone

He dropped
like a leaf on string
dangling in the wind
spinning one way
than the other
there was movement
in his fall
jerking spasms
a fly
in a spiders web
going through
the last throws
of life
then all was quiet
and still again
except for the creak
of the rope as it turned
in the sunlight
on his body
around his neck
only to be found
by a morning dog walker
the final leaf in a tree
yearning to reach the ground..

he was cold
neither he or her
knew if they were real
or even alive
which made me think
are leafs like ghosts
are ghosts like leafs
are forests...
at the cemetery i thought
i could see a girl dressed
in white
walking towards the trees
with my hands in my pockets
i thought
maybe ill follow her
all the way
deep inside the forests heart
until she lets me see
the ever ever palace
of eternal spinning leafs
this is what i have so far it's a rough draft but tell me what you think.(not done yet)

before you sits a broken man, a fragile pinkish heart in hand
peculiar how it can hurt so bad, while love is only in the mind
i miss you, every time Autumn comes around it's like you visit me for a full season,
and the memories of you are as vivid as Autumn leaves.
your red lips ,the yellow reminds me of you're blonde hair, your' eyes as hazel as Autumn's essence
that have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
and not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlit winter night
those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer, but when they spoke those cold words even tho i saw your beautiful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice,
and the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was, because every word hurt just as much.
yellow sirens flashing like when the wind blows thru Autumn leaves
the dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze,
and the leaves still haunt me, like ghosts in Halloween.
the wind still whispers your name, and like jackals i smile.
but just like that you left me once again.
love.
i know i need to learn to adapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
but the pain is too tense, this scar still itches, this broken heart still beats for you're pulse.
my eyes still long for Autumn's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false
because seasons change, rearrange, as bright green leaves turn yellow,red and brown see Autumn caught them and all those leaves must fall down.
rough draft, hope it was what you're looking for

befor you sit's a broken man, a fragile pinkish heart in hand
paculiar how it can hurt so bad, while love is only in the mind
i miss you, every time autum comes around it's like you visit me for a full season,
and the memories of you are as vivid as autum leaves.
your red lips ,the yellow reminds me of you're blonde hair, your' eyes as hazel as autums essence
that have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
and not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlit winter night
those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer, but when they spoke those cold words even tho i saw your beautyful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice,
and the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was, because every word hurt just as much.
Felt like I would die, I couldn't stand the pain. I felt myself slipping away
a knife up to your throat for the one put through my heart.
I often think back to that night, the moment when I found out that our love was a lie.
yellow sirins flashing like when the wind blows thru autum leavs
the dusk always coloring in the memories
the dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze,
and the leafs still haunt me, like ghosts in holloween.
the wind still whispers your name, and like jackals i carve myself a smile.
but just like that you left me once again.
summers of love fade into autumns of regret
i know i need to learn to addapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
but the pain is too tense, this scar still iches, this broken heart still beats for you're pulse.
my eyes still long for autum's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false
because seasons change, rearange, as bright green leaves turn yellow,red and brown see autum caught'em and all those leaves must fall down.
Dirtflake
rough draft, hope it was what you're looking for

befor you sit's a broken man, a fragile pinkish heart in hand
paculiar how it can hurt so bad, while love is only in the mind
i miss you, every time autum comes around it's like you visit me for a full season,
and the memories of you are as vivid as autum leaves.
your red lips ,the yellow reminds me of you're blonde hair, your' eyes as hazel as autums essence
that have once again reminded me of every leaf in that season falling like our love.
and not only does it remind me of your red lips but also of the running blood that turned my life into the longest cold moonlit winter night
those red lips warmed my spirit like the summer, but when they spoke those cold words even tho i saw your beautyful lips move it was like you had a heart of ice,
and the mist of your beauty blinded me to how hurtful the hail was, because every word hurt just as much.
Felt like I would die, I couldn't stand the pain. I felt myself slipping away
a knife up to your throat for the one put through my heart.
I often think back to that night, the moment when I found out that our love was a lie.
yellow sirins flashing like when the wind blows thru autum leavs
the dusk always coloring in the memories
the dying breath of my sunshine slowly getting carried away by the breeze,
and the leafs still haunt me, like ghosts in holloween.
the wind still whispers your name, and like jackals i carve myself a smile.
but just like that you left me once again.
summers of love fade into autumns of regret
i know i need to learn to addapt to change or get washed away like tears in the rain,
but the pain is too tense, this scar still iches, this broken heart still beats for you're pulse.
my eyes still long for autum's beauty incarnate, but this hope is false
because seasons change, rearange, as bright green leaves turn yellow,red and brown see autum caught'em and all those leaves must fall down.

emotion_kirakira Enchanting

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