Just something fun.

[Sheamaru]

<center>Sometimes I think you'll never understand me.
What I can and can't be.
You'll never see what I am, or what I'm not.
You'll just see me as a child, and how far have you got?

You don't think that I can do anything.
That my mind is filled with nothing.
But it really isn't true!
Why can't I show that to you?

It's like I'm the little sister you've never had.
You treat me like a sibling, good and bad.
But could I feel this way about you?
Could what I feel really be this true?

I just want you to see me for what I am.
I want you to believe in me and tell me that I can.
I want to know you trust me, I want to meet your eyes.
I love to see them light up, just like fireflys.

But maybe that's not it.
Perhaps it can't be seen.
Maybe I just think I love you.
I know you don't love me.

And even if you said you did, I just want to know.
Could you understand me?
For what I can can't be?
And would you love me too?

[heartof_ice]

wow..it descirbes how i felt some time ago perfectly! its incredible!! biggrin

[FrozenEnvy]

I like the tone of it, it's very interesting. I can see that there is alot of emotion put into it and something i might enjoy annotating since i questioning who is the person you love? a sister, friend, a lover? It's all quite complexing, well done! I like it.

[Sheamaru]

Thanks for your insight. I really appreciate it. 3nodding whee

[Sheamaru]

<center>The sun is shining for us today.
As I lie here in your arms.
My dreams just seem to drift away.
As the morning's first light calls.

When I look up to meet your face.
I place my hand upon your chest.
Your skin as soft as lace.
I know your there protecting me, I know you're there.

Today is going to be different.
I can tell as I get up.
I bear the scars of yesturday, permanent.
I wish they would go away.

The world is the whip upon my back.
But you're my saving Grace.
You broke the wrist that made the whip crack.
And then whiped my tears away.

I'm different and I know that now.
I'm not like everyone else.
But you accept me some how.
And you love me just the same.

As the sun rises and I look outside the window.
You come up behind me, and securly hug me from behind.
I feel safe now and know, my world is no longer shadow.
But a bright new day, as the sun shines now.

Although my scars remain.
Although my screams are hollow.
I know that time can refrain.
And take away my sorrow.

But what I really need, is not times help alone.
I need some one to be there for me.
Someone to call my own.
So I ask you now, with pleading eyes, and a heart that's tattered and torn.

To take me in and hold me close.
For fear I'll run away.
And tell me with truth in your voice.
That you'll live to love me another day.

[Feng Ru]

Sheamaru

<center>The sun is shining for us today.
As I lie here in your arms.
My dreams just seem to drift away.
As the morning's first light calls.

When I look up to meet your face.
I place my hand upon your chest.
Your skin as soft as lace.
I know your there protecting me, I know you're there.

Today is going to be different.
I can tell as I get up.
I bear the scars of yesturday, permanent.
I wish they would go away.

The world is the whip upon my back.
But you're my saving Grace.
You broke the wrist that made the whip crack.
And then whiped my tears away.

I'm different and I know that now.
I'm not like everyone else.
But you accept me some how.
And you love me just the same.

As the sun rises and I look outside the window.
You come up behind me, and securly hug me from behind.
I feel safe now and know, my world is no longer shadow.
But a bright new day, as the sun shines now.

Although my scars remain.
Although my screams are hollow.
I know that time can refrain.
And take away my sorrow.

But what I really need, is not times help alone.
I need some one to be there for me.
Someone to call my own.
So I ask you now, with pleading eyes, and a heart that's tattered and torn.

To take me in and hold me close.
For fear I'll run away.
And tell me with truth in your voice.
That you'll live to love me another day.

Wow. I like this. I especially like the 4th stanza. As part of the poem I picture a sense of heroism in the part of your significant other or of the one in which the poem speaks of. Though it is deemed as another love poem, it is still pretty good. I hope you enjoyed writing it as I enjoyed reading it.

[Sheamaru]

Wow thanks, I'm glad you like it. Feel free to check back, I'll keep writing more and hopefully not all just love poems. whee

[Mizushima_Natako]

I love it!!!!! ^_____^ *watching a movie* I love vampires!!!!!! Cole, Sachio, and Mori say hi Sheamaru!!!!!!!!!

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[hesse_incarnate]

It just didn't catch my attention. It seemed to wane at the second last stanza.

[Sheamaru]

hesse_incarnate

It just didn't catch my attention. It seemed to wane at the second last stanza.

Which one?