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Post: 79386313_1 created on Wed, 25 Apr 2012 00:30:11 +0000
Posted: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 00:30:11 +0000

dont u see the screaming surrounds me,cant u tell as i scream and dream,dont u know things arent how they seem,u dont know the things ive seen,ive seen a dad leave his son a mom try her best,im not like the rest,still i scream and dream,and think the best,sometimes its good not to be like the rest,i will try my best and shun the rest,til my final breath i will scream and dream heart MADE BY ME!

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Post: 79386313_2 created on Wed, 25 Apr 2012 00:31:46 +0000
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BRING ME THE H0RIZON-00

dont u see the dark surrounds me,cant u tell as i scream and dream,dont u know things arent how they seem,u dont know the things ive seen,ive seen a dad leave his son a mom try her best,im not like the rest,still i scream and dream,and think the best,sometimes its good not to be like the rest,i will try my best and shun the rest,til my final breath i will scream and dream heart MADE BY ME!

the poem i made is called scream and dream its about my love for screamo.<3