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When there’s courage to show your love,

There’s always a wave of rejection

,Till the intensity of your feeling’s gone

dragging your courage underground

So much care you had for others

and less to your pity soul.

Yet every things' not enough;

Yet from the start, you are nothing.

You’re invisible, like you never existed.

You are not loved;

yet you are not getting tired

still hoping for nothing;

as if hoping for the rain comes to the desert.

You use the dark to hide what is real

as if you use a blanket to hide a scar.

When,

When will you accept the light?

The light that will uncover the reality,

that reality of you

trying to embrace the air.

Forget insanity and

Try to seek

the true art of LOVE.
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"When will you accept the light?" is a pretty powerful line. You could use part of that, such as "When" or "Accept the Light" as your title.
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"Seeking The Art of Love"

surprised mixing the last two lines of the poem.
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