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Hot blushing mistress
I am here to make you full
let the water burst
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Swashbuckling Phantom

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My limbs are as stone
as I watch your shrinking back
running from my hand.

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Our tips of pleasure
lips that love to kiss fingers
pip pip suck wetter
Yamakaze Kuro
My inkwell is dry.
Must we kill another bird
to finish this tale?


Clever, I love it. smile
Together again
little Humpty Dumpty bits
The chain you fixed
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Dangerous Conversationalist

You made a mistake
There are six syllables in
your haiku's first line
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An amateur grin.
This weaver did not expect
more than a lost thread.

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'Something sweet, perhaps,'
She thought, rummaging through the
Refrigerator
No tears over spilt milk
if you leave the cow alone
moo om om om om
Pink C a n a r y
You made a mistake
There are six syllables in
your haiku's first line


No there isnt ring!
ring! ring! ring! click ring! click klunk
Doh! chain broke again
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I hope you know that
an onomatopoeia
can be overused.

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Dangerous Conversationalist

Silly, you fixed it!
It sounds better than before,
you are truly great =)
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Swashbuckling Phantom

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The light has gone out
because the cruel clock now reads:
eleven o'clock.

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I hit the big time
left you in the U.S.A
made it all alone
The Nature of Little Kids That Think They Can Write Haiku

Empty words! Ignorance!
Nature's epiphany?
You have all missed it.


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