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I saw you running away from me
The snow was falling freezing the moment in time
The half moon shown lighting up the your tears
I cause you pain when your near me
And it hurts you more to run away
So I make you live a life of agony every night and day
I didn’t mean it when I said I hated you
I think you knew but it burned the same when it was said
And in this moment frozen in time I wish I could tell you the truth
But my voice is dead and cannot be heard
Or is it that my heart is uneasy to unfamiliar to the words
Words that I keep think of in my mind but can’t voice outside my mind
I’ve held it back to long and it was unfair of me to but the truth is
I love you
I like the rhyming placed in to this work *Nods*
Lady_Darkness_Of_Fate
I like the rhyming placed in to this work *Nods*
rhyming? ok sure
Lady_Darkness_Of_Fate
I like the rhyming placed in to this work *Nods*

i liked the poetry.
All mine's in my journal
It is a very nice poem you wrote there. i love it. biggrin
I like it. The poem sent shivers down my spine! Probably because of the mention of freezing and snow...and my artistic, emotional mind. ^^

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