"Faceless Consummation" Critique/Commentary Welcomed.

[Intrinsic Delirium]

"Faceless Consummation"

Ways that follow into me,
Soul forking impatiently,
Questioning that of whom I wish to be,
A feigned promise to set this cage free,
Bouts of hollowed serenity,
Infecting thoughts that leech seductively,
Curse that rapes my childish destiny,
From my false hope I am forced to see.

Travesty!
A rioting sound,
My passionate light on merry-go-round,
Natural innocence submerged to beneath ground,
Heart emptied limitation,
Coiled fascination,
Masochistic laceration,
Boldly howling rancid contamination.

Ways that follow into me,
Soul forking impatiently,
Questioning that of whom I wish to be,
A feigned promise to set this cage free,
Bouts of hollowed serenity,
Infecting thoughts that leech seductively,
Curse that rapes my childish destiny,
From my false hope I am forced to see.

Solemnity!
Purpose on edge its time to leave,
Denial of this game called make believe,
Proof once misconceived,
Careless hindrances we breath,
World of domination,
Acts of humiliation,
Mental defeat across my imitation,
Rise my faceless consummation!

Ways that follow into me,
Soul forking impatiently,
Questioning that of whom I wish to be,
A feigned promise to set this cage free,
Bouts of hollowed serenity,
Infecting thoughts that leech seductively,
Curse that rapes my childish destiny,
From my false hope I am forced to see.