This still reads like
it could be about depression (depending upon individual interpretation)
The first four lines
would synch with
a depressive mind set
or the state of depression
(other interpretations could be - that maybe this was written by someone, who has been written about negatively in a newspaper - blurred words, faded over time, a footballer reading bad things about themselves in the paper - might start playing bad - this ties in with the clouded truth and becoming blind)
The next four lines
have some beautiful
depression moments
that i guess
a lot of people who
have experienced depression
would be able to emphasize with
- drowned words in the throat that stay unsaid - yes
each breath dripping with their memory - yes
grey waters filling up your head - yes
and thoughts in dischord - yes
Quote:
This started out as being about depression. And then it stopped making sense
The poem being about depression, makes complete sense to me - ive got a little question, where or why did it stop making sense for you?