Come post your poems

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This is a thread Im making for people to come and hang out and post poems for people here to read.

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This is my favorite poem i have ever written



Do you really understand
Do you know the nature of my aggression
The origin of my anger
The hatred of my heart
The misplaced emotion of my mind
The sorrow of my soul
No you don’t and don’t think you do

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Ok Im here....

[blackangel9999]

when you think
that no one may care
when you feel
you can't share
Share all the things
that you feel
that in their eyes
you can't be real
be real enough
to share tour dreams
your thoughts flowing out
like magical streams
streams of silver
streams of gold
things of new
things of old
that are waiting to unfold

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That was a good poem here is another of mine...



I stay afraid of society
Like a scolded dog I hide away
I sit back and watch the world go by
I see the people change and the attitudes fade away
But I will never change the way I act for anyone
The way I look for anyone
I will always watch society whit hateful eyes
And think of all the times
That I have been pushed away and frowned upon
For nothing but ideas and dreams
But that’s the way the world will be and it will never change for me

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i cant see the posts....

[RenagadeBlue16]

mmk...

since poetry is all im good at...

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Away, Moon

Wind is blowing through my cloak
that helps me not tonight
cause conflict always worsens
when you can see what you fight.
Do now I stand, a broken man,
and suddenly, some light
has come to make me happy,
but just amasses fright.
I hold a hand up, try to blot
the beams that only burn,
but after failure, I must look
to see what I can learn.
Towards the night my sad eyes drift
in moon I see your face.
I wince with pain from past thoughts that
my mind cannot erase.
Crouching deep, ‘away, away’
thus to the moon I cry.
I cannot take what feelings come,
and surely soon, I’ll die.
Away, away moon, you are pain;
your light tears at my soul.
Your mirrored rays are vicious
and I’ll never more be whole
The thoughts of when you weren’t here
bring thoughts of when you were,
and only post-remembrance
do thoughts of lost occur.
You must have been fresh under mind
to make me so depressed,
and keep my soul in moody state
despite my mind’s request.
And so, I’m stuck here in the night
with demons laughing on
I won’t be happy err again
until at last you’re gone.

[Celarania]

*shrugs* I thought this was good.

Remember when we were younger
side by side near a stream
And when we played together
and you called me tetris queen?

We laughed by a river
and dove into a stream
When we played pranks
Just to hear the ladies scream.

But we're older now
And more mature I guess
But the other day we made fun of
the girl we call still Bess.

I remember making mud pies
Though we still throw dirt
I remember those band aids
And kissing away hurts.

Learning how to take "turns"
but more learning how to fool
And the very first day
of the evil they called school.

We somehow grow closer still
bound by troubles and pain
But we comforted each other
''til we learned to live again.

I could cry on your shoulder
when the world became to much
And I'll never forget
your ever loving touch.

You were my froggie king
and I your fighting friend
And so together
we made a pact to never end.

We swore to stay together
though the world may shift and spin
Over through everything
together we would win.

I said I could tell you anything
and I didn't mean to lie
I could tell you everything
Everything except goodbye.

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so umm this forum is screwed up i cant see any posts....

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Celarania

*shrugs* I thought this was good.

Remember when we were younger
side by side near a stream
And when we played together
and you called me tetris queen?

We laughed by a river
and dove into a stream
When we played pranks
Just to hear the ladies scream.

But we're older now
And more mature I guess
But the other day we made fun of
the girl we call still Bess.

I remember making mud pies
Though we still throw dirt
I remember those band aids
And kissing away hurts.

Learning how to take "turns"
but more learning how to fool
And the very first day
of the evil they called school.

We somehow grow closer still
bound by troubles and pain
But we comforted each other
''til we learned to live again.

I could cry on your shoulder
when the world became to much
And I'll never forget
your ever loving touch.

You were my froggie king
and I your fighting friend
And so together
we made a pact to never end.

We swore to stay together
though the world may shift and spin
Over through everything
together we would win.

I said I could tell you anything
and I didn't mean to lie
I could tell you everything
Everything except goodbye.

Damn thats a very good poem i would love to read more of your work

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Celarania

*shrugs* I thought this was good.

Remember when we were younger
side by side near a stream
And when we played together
and you called me tetris queen?

We laughed by a river
and dove into a stream
When we played pranks
Just to hear the ladies scream.

But we're older now
And more mature I guess
But the other day we made fun of
the girl we call still Bess.

I remember making mud pies
Though we still throw dirt
I remember those band aids
And kissing away hurts.

Learning how to take "turns"
but more learning how to fool
And the very first day
of the evil they called school.

We somehow grow closer still
bound by troubles and pain
But we comforted each other
''til we learned to live again.

I could cry on your shoulder
when the world became to much
And I'll never forget
your ever loving touch.

You were my froggie king
and I your fighting friend
And so together
we made a pact to never end.

We swore to stay together
though the world may shift and spin
Over through everything
together we would win.

I said I could tell you anything
and I didn't mean to lie
I could tell you everything
Everything except goodbye.

Damn thats a very good poem i would love to read more of your work

[Tiana-Hime]

ooh ^^ i'd like to post some poetry... sweatdrop

ahh.. i loved that poem ^^ was it inspired by anything..?

and sushi isnt being nice!!! >_

[deonaris]

This is a fave of mine that some of my friends really liked. here goes:

Miss Me Much

Some things I know,
And others not so much.
But one thing's for sure,
I miss me much.

At times I'm lost,
Seeking a guiding light.
I make you my beacon,
Piercing eternal night.

I miss me much,
I really do.
I get lost in myself,
When thinking of you.

You can make things right,
Or horribly wrong.
At times I blame you
For why I'm lost so long.

And while I'm lost
I get to thinking,
Knowing that you get like this
That you too, are sinking.

I miss me much,
I really do.
I get lost in myself,
When thinking of you.

Whenever you sink,
I try to pull you out.
Yet when you don't help me,
I'm filled with doubt.

You may never understand
The things that I do.
But know that I do them
Out of love for you.

I miss me much,
I really do.
I get lost in myself,
When thinking of you.

I may miss myself
But one other thing's for sure.
No matter how much
I miss myself,
I miss you a whole lot more.

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ok what is wrong whit this forum...

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This is another from me (Im so glad people are coming to post there poetry that takes alot of courage thank you all for the support of this thread)



All the doors to my mind close
I stand there and stare
I just want to be left alone
Never ask me for help
Never ask me to care
I will never help anyone or care for anyone
I just want to stand here till I die
Just stand and watch the sky
And hope it falls and ends it all