Cold night suicide...

[Atomic Air]

Cluttered thoughts in my head
As he`s lying there
But take my life instead.....
All through the night inside this town
Too many things i`m turning down
Just waiting for this heart to stop pounding
Recognizing this constant reminiscing
I think and i don`t know why
Just bring me alive...

Don`t know what else to do
She couldn`t believe she fell for you
Open those crystal eyes
Bring her alive
Bring her alive
Inside the house
Just as he was walking he found..
The cold corpse lying on the ground
Looking at those cold dead eyes
He didn`t want to survive

Open up those damn drawers
Find that sharpest knife
Reminiscing the moment of that kiss
Remember when he brought her to life
But no, that is only just a dream
Beyond that fantasy
But he..
Will be what he wants to be
~Atomic Air~

[iiEuphoria]

gd job!!!
its awesome...i like it mrgreen

[Innocent_Slut_19]

I must say I very much like the poem and the way it was written. I wish my poetry amounted to half of what you're capable of.

[Atomic Air]

OtakuAllegretto22

I must say I very much like the poem and the way it was written. I wish my poetry amounted to half of what you're capable of.

Why thank you.

[Atomic Air]

CD-Creme

gd job!!!
its awesome...i like it mrgreen

Ty^ ^

[Sylverx]

Very amazing and well written. ^_^

[Atomic Air]

Shattered Cobalt

Very amazing and well written. ^_^

Yay!;D