toasted_toenail
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- Posted: Tue, 23 Nov 2004 10:29:24 +0000
Bevy
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To eat candied sugar from tea-kettle,
Sit down on bed, no worries about not changed bedding,
Lie like that for couple of years and don't think that
Somebody outside my privacy still wants to yell: "Ready, steady, go!"
Just from time to time align feet in 90ยบ gradient to ceiling,
Realise: something's there except me -
- "Furniture", "clothes", "walls" and "windows"
Outside the "windows" - "people".
Can easy swamp in the world of my own solitary,
Now vapid reflections, not revealing - but sated,
To be far away from fulfilments and passions, from disillusionments;
In front of "me" no choices: these day-to-day and more important,
Have no ways or signposts, only void wasted space,
But still there's a chance to crop anything you wish.
Everybody dreams about own world,
They're all assumedly parallel.
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I like last line. Had a little problem with writing it in impersonal form, but I think it's OK - though there're some "me" or "my". D:
Alritght. That's not Babylon burning, now the Zion falls. Pay 300g and higher for crits. I'm on the bottom of bottomness. heart
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To eat candied sugar from tea-kettle,
Sit down on bed, no worries about not changed bedding,
Lie like that for couple of years and don't think that
Somebody outside my privacy still wants to yell: "Ready, steady, go!"
Just from time to time align feet in 90ยบ gradient to ceiling,
Realise: something's there except me -
- "Furniture", "clothes", "walls" and "windows"
Outside the "windows" - "people".
Can easy swamp in the world of my own solitary,
Now vapid reflections, not revealing - but sated,
To be far away from fulfilments and passions, from disillusionments;
In front of "me" no choices: these day-to-day and more important,
Have no ways or signposts, only void wasted space,
But still there's a chance to crop anything you wish.
Everybody dreams about own world,
They're all assumedly parallel.
---
I like last line. Had a little problem with writing it in impersonal form, but I think it's OK - though there're some "me" or "my". D:
Alritght. That's not Babylon burning, now the Zion falls. Pay 300g and higher for crits. I'm on the bottom of bottomness. heart
