Any critiques on original rap lyrics?

[Rae-Phot]

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[J_Wesley_1995]

It's quite enjoyable, a little hard to understand at some points due to quality, but it's got a good message to it, lyrics are great, overall, great job! I actually posted one of my own on here a few days ago. Keep up the good work, we need more like you if we ever have a chance of reforming the genre back to music instead of what it is today.

[Rae-Phot]

Tahnks for the insight! I'll work harder to enunciate. And you rap as well? Care to share?

[J_Wesley_1995]

Rae-Phot

Tahnks for the insight! I'll work harder to enunciate. And you rap as well? Care to share?

Not a problem, it was very good, just like I said difficult to understand at parts due to (and I'm only guessing) recording quality. I haven't recorded anything, but I've written a couple of songs. I posted one of them the other day that I'm still not entirely finished with, but the title is The End of Misery - Time for Goodbye? You're more than welcome to check it out, give insight, whatever. Here's the link http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/original-poetry-lyrics/the-end-of-misery-time-for-goodbye/t.94795711_1/#1