iamtheanimegirl
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- Posted: Sun, 04 Mar 2012 03:09:00 +0000
......I wanna find out if my lyrics/poems are any good...and I'm kinda shy....please be kind to me crying redface Also, a lot of them are in snippets because I couldn't find the words to finish them, so if you have any suggestions, let me know.
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Alleviate this dark passion,
Turn me away from this black magic
I can feel it writhing inside
Icy cold fingers wrapped around my heart,
Boiling hot hands tearing me in half
Dissolving me and handing my body over to this demon,
This inner beast,
This monster inside my mind
Set me free tonight
Give me just one moment of being myself again
Let me breath
Just one last time
I’m self-destructing,
Turning myself over to this fiend
Allowing it to breathe,
Finding its room inside my cold,
Black heart
Initiating the age-old story today
Letting it out and locking myself in
Because I’m doomed anyways
It’s always there
Lurking beneath my every thought
So after we have a few minutes
I’ll open the door and feel it’s hungry teeth devour my skin
~~~
The perfect smile,
Perfect hair,
That’s what it’s all about.
Get your day of fame,
Then get out
~~~
Frozen tears
Shattering before they’re shed
Broken shards
Pressing into my brain
I’m going numb
I’m falling apart
Before I start
I’m letting myself go and
Hittin’ my all-time low
~~~
I fall towards the end
Am I dying?
Spiraling towards the final apocalypse
The last moments
My last breath
The final song
~~~
I’m turning over a new page
And ripping out the rest
Tryin’ to hide myself from
What I thought I knew best
~~~
I could write a hundred songs
To try to make you understand
And I would say three million words
Just to get you to hold my hand
This isn’t the way it’s supposed to be
I’m not me without you
I’m done trying it,
No way of denying it
~~~
So, whataya think? Comment? Rate? Message? Friend me? Please be kind? redface
~~~~
Alleviate this dark passion,
Turn me away from this black magic
I can feel it writhing inside
Icy cold fingers wrapped around my heart,
Boiling hot hands tearing me in half
Dissolving me and handing my body over to this demon,
This inner beast,
This monster inside my mind
Set me free tonight
Give me just one moment of being myself again
Let me breath
Just one last time
I’m self-destructing,
Turning myself over to this fiend
Allowing it to breathe,
Finding its room inside my cold,
Black heart
Initiating the age-old story today
Letting it out and locking myself in
Because I’m doomed anyways
It’s always there
Lurking beneath my every thought
So after we have a few minutes
I’ll open the door and feel it’s hungry teeth devour my skin
~~~
The perfect smile,
Perfect hair,
That’s what it’s all about.
Get your day of fame,
Then get out
~~~
Frozen tears
Shattering before they’re shed
Broken shards
Pressing into my brain
I’m going numb
I’m falling apart
Before I start
I’m letting myself go and
Hittin’ my all-time low
~~~
I fall towards the end
Am I dying?
Spiraling towards the final apocalypse
The last moments
My last breath
The final song
~~~
I’m turning over a new page
And ripping out the rest
Tryin’ to hide myself from
What I thought I knew best
~~~
I could write a hundred songs
To try to make you understand
And I would say three million words
Just to get you to hold my hand
This isn’t the way it’s supposed to be
I’m not me without you
I’m done trying it,
No way of denying it
~~~
So, whataya think? Comment? Rate? Message? Friend me? Please be kind? redface