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All my life I knew I was the greatest,
Runnin' laps, I knew I was the fastest,
In this game I know I'm the cruelest.
In this religion I know I'm the damndest
Verses flow, I know I'm on the fast lane,
Threw away my past now, aint no more pain,
And now I'm livin' with so much to gain,
So bring the noise mahn, i'll bring the rain.

That look, on your face, is fake,
Step to me, I'll hurt you, heartache,
Challenge me, you'll see, you'll break,
Try punch me, this pain, I'll take.
Can't stop, this flow, you'll burn,
You're death, won't bring, any mourn,
Body's heavy, pulse weak, you're torn.
Through you death, I'll be, Reborn.

Show me your hate, and I'll break you.
All these words through my lips, are true.
Put these words, in your heart and right through,
Cause I mean what I say, and everythin' I do.
Take my fist, to your chest, and through your heart,
hands 'round your throat, tear you apart,
Try'na fight back kid? Don't even start,
Don't play ma game, go play mario kart.
You can't beat me, so don't even try,
'Cause when I spit, all you do is cry,
I'm the best, unlike the rest, and it aint no lie.
So when I say 'go down' you better ********' die!

That look, on your face, is fake,
Step to me, I'll hurt you, heartache,
Challenge me, you'll see, you'll break,
Try punch me, this pain, I'll take.
Can't stop, this flow, you'll burn,
You're death, won't bring, any mourn,
Body's heavy, pulse weak, you're torn.
Through you death, I'll be, Reborn.



Dudes tellin me, I'm the s**t,
hands held high when I spit,
Wavin round, like you havin a fit,
Tellin' me 'yet anotha hit'
Tell me somethin I don't know,
There aint nowhere I won't go,
haters gonna hate on me so?
But man I still feel s**t though.

Work is gettin me down,
Don't belong in this town,
And man I feel like a clown,
Face is grey, clothes brown.
And I'm feelin spent,
Money came and went,
So Man I need to vent,
So please hear when I repent.

Lookin' at the clock, time passes slowly,
Pain strikes back, and I'm the goalie,
I came back from the dead, so I guess I'm unholy,
And this pressure lies with me solely.
Bodies getting to the point of breaking,
I keel right over, my hands are shaking,
But you still listen to what I'm making,
But don't you ever give? Instead of just taking.

Work is getting me down,
Don't belong in this town,
And man I feel like a clown,
Face is grey, clothes brown.
And I'm feeling spent,
Money came and went,
So man I need to vent,
So please hear when I repent


I wake up and I see your face,
How did I end up in this place,
You look at me with your shine and grace,
Your hand on my chest, woah aint a race.
You say 'shh I'll make your feel right'
I look in your eyes and see a glimmer of light.
'Girl not this mornin' ask me again tonight'
You say I'm an ungrateful little shite.

Girl come back inside please,
but she walks away, Am on mah knees,
In a dressin' gown I feel a cold breeze,
'Girl come back, girl you'll freeze'
The weather outside is feelin' so cold, ha,
So come back and let me hold ya,
Put your hands around my hips, ah,
Then You whisper 'Come with me Trigg-ah'

'Cause my girl is so fine,
So glad I made her be mine,
Brighter than the sun shine,
We walkin' on the grand line,
We go back to bed but she wants a little more,
I try fall asleep and she calls be a bore,
'Girl you know it's you who I adore'
'you don't love me, you're rotten to the core'

Girl come back inside please,
but she walks away, Am on mah knees,
In a dressin' gown I feel a cold breeze,
'Girl come back, girl you'll freeze'
The weather outside is feelin' so cold, ha,
So come back and let me hold ya,
Put your hands around my hips, ah,
Then You whisper 'Come with me Trigg-ah'


Push yourself to me closely,
Your smile is always so lovely,
Your laugh is always so lively,
So press yourself to me slowly.
I'll protect you from the hurt,
And let the haters get burnt,
It's a lesson well learnt,
Words flow like a steady current.

Wrap your arms around me tighter,
Believe that for you I'm a fighter,
Words ring true, for you I'm a writer,
I'm in heaven, body's gettin' lighter.
You show me the light inside,
I'm livin' life now, aint gonna hide.
And I remember the first time you cried,
Forgot my own pain, threw it to the side.

So stop the tears and give me your pain
I'll take this world, I'll take reign,
'Cause with these raps, I'll take the fast lane
I won't rest 'til the whole world's slain.
'Cause meeting you, I guess I've been blessed,
Stepped up to the game, Accepted the master quest.
Dungeons and dragon's? Hah! I'm headed West.
If this life is a game, then i picked up the best.

Wrap your arms around me tighter,
Believe that for you I'm a fighter,
Words ring true, for you I'm a writer,
I'm in heaven, body's gettin' lighter.
You show me the light inside,
I'm livin' life now, aint gonna hide.
And I remember the first time you cried,
Forgot my own pain, threw it to the side.


My Hearts been broken,
Ripped it and it tore,
And I feel outspoken,
With my family's bore,
Coz they don't get my pain,
Thinking I'll be okay,
And now I'm hiding in the rain,
My music always on replay,
Inspiration fills me deep,
I'll bounce back from this,
Even though the hill is steep,
This hurt is a piece of piss,
My body feels heavy now,
But I'm lookin' at the stars,
And though I don't know how,
I'll step out from behind these bars,
Imprisoned, is where my heart lays,
Held captive, Until the last day,
Still beating, as this song plays,
With you, my heart will always stay.


The stars in the sky,
Mean nothin' to me,
And though I'm lost in pride,
You're all my heart'll ever see.
'Cause truly my heart beats for you,
And I'm feelin' good right now,
'Cause we're held together like glue,
And this one's for you, Triggerz pulled, Plow!
My heart is tugging for you,
And I know this' outta the blue,
But this song, to me, is true,
So I'mma sing it right through.
And as the world spins round,
I know I'll always be around,
And I'll smile through this town,
This town so beat and run down.

A town so lost in a desolate soul,
But I keep smilin' Runnin round this hole,
And your smile, will make me feel whole,
'Cause right now I'm in heaven, reached my goal.
I've put all my cards, down on the table.
So baby come with me, if you're able,
My heart was a war, but with you I'm stable,
I thought I was dreamin' this is my fable.
I swear I must be dreamin right now,
'Cause I was dead before this, anyhow,
I'm back for the Rebirth, this is my vow,
Because I'm shooting for the stars, God allow.
I may not be religious, but I believe in this,
And this feeling I have. Nothing short of bliss,
You threw me the rope, took me out the abyss,
And now I'm in love, So I give you this kiss.


Left me out, In the cold,
Memories scar, Until I am old,
Forget the hurt. Then I've struck gold,
Brainwashed, I've been controlled.
Heart so dark and filled with hate,
Force too strong, for me to negate,
I put it down, to a twist of fate,
By the time you come, it'll be too late.

And I'm goooone, I'm gone.
Too faaar soo looong.
and at the brink of dawwn.
I'll turn the game back on.
And though my body's torn,
There's still no time to mourn,
Be sure that I'll return,
I'll be. REBORN!

Left me out, In the cold,
Memories scar, Until I am old,
Forget the hurt. Then I've struck gold,
Brainwashed, I've been controlled.
Heart so dark and filled with hate,
Force too strong, for me to negate,
I put it down, to a twist of fate,
By the time you come, it'll be too late.

Runnin' for my life, escaping these fools.
Reaching for a weapon, I'm grabbin' tools,
Escaping bullies, I'm changing schools,
A wild troll appears. ******** their rules.
I'll tear him down, and break him apart,
Keep scratching away to find a blackened heart.
Thrown in torment, Like mine at the start,
I've made a friend, we'll make this art.


Lord help me now, Please Send me a prayer,
Nah ******** that, you weren't even there.
You didn't give me s**t, So why should I share,
I'm keepin' my fortune, So let me make it clear.
You don't know the s**t I've been through,
There's no truth in your lies, and what you do
is sit there on your throne. I'm on mine too.
Difference is that I'm greater, greater than you

I'll see you in hell, though you were born in heaven.
You've sinned more, All of the deadly seven,
Letting you live, is out of the question.
You could've saved me, from all the depression.
But you just sat there, on your ******** throne,
Descriminating a God, I'm one of your own,
I'll take your crown, My name carved in stone,
I won't follow your crowd, I won't be your drone.

Lord help me now, Please Send me a prayer,
Nah ******** that, you weren't even there.
You didn't give me s**t, So why should I share,
I'm keepin' my fortune, So let me make it clear.
You don't know the s**t I've been through,
There's no truth in your lies, and what you do
is sit there on your throne. I'm on mine too.
Difference is that I'm greater, greater than you

I'll break you down, teach you a lesson.
Now I'm going to show you, all my aggression.
You've had it now, I won't show discretion.
I've got the intent to kill, this is my confession.
I'm not holding back, you're going down,
Walking around, this ******** ghost town,
I tried to find you, but you weren't around.
This s**t's so funny, you're a ******** clown.

Lord help me now, Please Send me a prayer,
Nah ******** that, you weren't even there.
You didn't give me s**t, So why should I share,
I'm keepin' my fortune, So let me make it clear.
You don't know the s**t I've been through,
There's no truth in your lies, and what you do
is sit there on your throne. I'm on mine too.
Difference is that I'm greater, greater than you
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I really enjoyed all of them. They are so heartfelt and inspiring. How you were able to put the words together so they fit perfectly was amazing. Heh heh dramallama mrgreen
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I really enjoyed all of them. They are so heartfelt and inspiring. How you were able to put the words together so they fit perfectly was amazing. Heh heh dramallama mrgreen

Haha I suppose it's my talent. I knew I had to have one...
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they better than mine, i posted 3 of my poems today but they're not as good as these
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?
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they better than mine, i posted 3 of my poems today but they're not as good as these

Thanks, I appreciate it.
I was born with the talent to speak to people's hearts I guess, people tell me that at least even if I don't believe it. I kinda want to do something productive with it but I'm untalented in staying focused xD
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?

It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?

It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.

Well, poems and lyrics. mostly lyrics, Most of my poems are in my journal
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?

It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.

Well, poems and lyrics. mostly lyrics, Most of my poems are in my journal

Yeah. They are mostly lyrics. x3
Most of my poems are all over the place. =P
And it's fun to look at things from middle school that are so corny and make we want to shove my head in closet and never come out, haha! xD
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?

It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.

Well, poems and lyrics. mostly lyrics, Most of my poems are in my journal

Yeah. They are mostly lyrics. x3
Most of my poems are all over the place. =P
And it's fun to look at things from middle school that are so corny and make we want to shove my head in closet and never come out, haha! xD

I delete things if I no longer like them xD
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I got energized reading these poems-they really make you feel the way you feel, haha! XD

I feel like bahaha I don't take BS! >;D

I really liked the fifth one. o3o

haha thank you ^_^
Why the emphasis on energised?

It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.

Well, poems and lyrics. mostly lyrics, Most of my poems are in my journal

Yeah. They are mostly lyrics. x3
Most of my poems are all over the place. =P
And it's fun to look at things from middle school that are so corny and make we want to shove my head in closet and never come out, haha! xD

I delete things if I no longer like them xD

But what if someone, somewhere happens to save that terrible piece of emotional crap just to spite you, and you never know who or where? DX
Lol, j/k. That's just paranoia talking. x3
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It's emphasized 'cause you used strong adjectives and words. o3o
Sounds like these are good poems to hear in a Slam Poetry place.

Well, poems and lyrics. mostly lyrics, Most of my poems are in my journal

Yeah. They are mostly lyrics. x3
Most of my poems are all over the place. =P
And it's fun to look at things from middle school that are so corny and make we want to shove my head in closet and never come out, haha! xD

I delete things if I no longer like them xD

But what if someone, somewhere happens to save that terrible piece of emotional crap just to spite you, and you never know who or where? DX
Lol, j/k. That's just paranoia talking. x3

I have slight paranoia too... It's not exactly fun..
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they better than mine, i posted 3 of my poems today but they're not as good as these

Thanks, I appreciate it.
I was born with the talent to speak to people's hearts I guess, people tell me that at least even if I don't believe it. I kinda want to do something productive with it but I'm untalented in staying focused xD


i think im more of a book writer than a poet but your right it is hard to stay focused on it for a while thats why i have 2 unfinshed books. im good with starting them and i have the idea of what i want them to do in my head but it hard to have pactients to build it up to that point and i have bad spelling... so i thought i would try to write a poem or 2

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