A Student's Babbling Speaks the Mind For All

[Kyawaii Bae]

A student's babbling speaks the mind for all:

Opportunities don't just come and go all the time.
But maybe we're just not looking hard enough.
Maybe, we're just too blind to see
What's right in front of us
Masked in a clouded mist of stress.
And we're lucky
Enough to stay sane
To stay alive.
So it's concluded
That maybe,
Just maybe,
The standards we set for ourselves,
Are too high.

[Personalized Hellscape]

nice !

[sora wonk]

The first sentence of this poem makes it really interesting. Possibly you could make the punctuation reflect babbling, but as it is, it lends to a certain sense of the person speaking too, which is good.