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Post: 78790251_1 created on Thu, 29 Mar 2012 00:11:57 +0000
Posted: Thu, 29 Mar 2012 00:11:57 +0000

Heres a little girl
lost in a world.
Never to know
what loves is.
But she knows
what hurt is.
And as she
live her life.
she discover a
knife.
And with one quick
motion.
She ended her life
with a devotion.

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Post: 78790251_2 created on Thu, 29 Mar 2012 02:32:06 +0000
Posted: Thu, 29 Mar 2012 02:32:06 +0000

Are you welcoming critiques??

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Post: 78790251_3 created on Thu, 29 Mar 2012 23:39:19 +0000
Posted: Thu, 29 Mar 2012 23:39:19 +0000

Ohh noo nonething like that, i mean it haves a negative vibe but not critique.

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