We stood staring out at the miles of farm land in silence. It was so real, none of the plastic made dreams, just pure beauty. It was our world and it was time for me to really start living it.
This, this, this! It gets to me, it makes me smile, it gives me that kind of warm feeling in my chest that makes me know it's something good. Sounds like you're heading in a great direction.
Thank you... yeah I don't have a fantasy theme to it or anything. I just kind of wanted to go in the 'real life' direction.
Well I'm excited about that. I do like fantasy and anything unreal, but it's nice when there's a real life-type novel that can make what we think of as average really become something we didn't see before in it, and make us appreciate it when we might not have before. So good luck!