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I am debating whether or not to do this, so right now I am just kind of... dilly-dallying about. XD
But my problem right now is a sentence.
"And so he began walking, leaving behind a trail of confusion, mystery and a plethora of assumptions that were ready to be made. "
Does anyone see something wrong with it like me, and therefore a possible solution? Or does it look fine? /dies
Pardon me if I get over-critical.. Not trying to.. but here we go.
Firstly, I wouldn't start a sentence with 'and'.
Secondly, plethora isn't really.. used correctly in the sentence.. Plethora technically means "too many" and I'm not sure but I don't think it is what you are going for.
Also, I think this sounds like a tagline.. Something an advertiser would write on the back of a book to get someone excited about it.. It really doesn't sound like an actual sentence from a book.