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- Posted: Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:46:09 +0000
AndreaHarper
r e d L 0 B S T 3 R
AndreaHarper
r e d L 0 B S T 3 R
AndreaHarper
r e d L 0 B S T 3 R
I am debating whether or not to do this, so right now I am just kind of... dilly-dallying about. XD
But my problem right now is a sentence.
"And so he began walking, leaving behind a trail of confusion, mystery and a plethora of assumptions that were ready to be made. "
Does anyone see something wrong with it like me, and therefore a possible solution? Or does it look fine? /dies
But my problem right now is a sentence.
"And so he began walking, leaving behind a trail of confusion, mystery and a plethora of assumptions that were ready to be made. "
Does anyone see something wrong with it like me, and therefore a possible solution? Or does it look fine? /dies
...leaving behind a trail of confusion AND mystery, compounding the plethora of assumptions ready to be made....
Or something similar. You've got two words that work as a list, and then a third that is something else entirely.
Does this make sense?
Is it possible for you to elaborate more? /facepalm
The word "compounding" is confusing me, I think. And I feel so stupid saying that. XD
I guess I just don't know... What that means?
I mean, I know the word, but.. Haha, I don't know.
Compounding: Adding, making more, multiplying. (Like compound interest smile ) You could instead say something like ...adding to the plethora of assumptions ready to be made... or something like that. Basically, the sentence is saying that his trail of confusion and mystery is taking this huge pile of assumptions and making it even bigger.
And I'm sorry. Linguistics major. You're lucky I didn't come out with something like asymptote or defenestrated.
Thank you!
Haha, and to think I know the word asymptote. XD c:
How about defenestrated? ;D