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The anatomy could use some work, particularly in the arms, but other than that it's very adorable! I love your style and coloring :3

Very good! I especially like the coloring! Though, I think this would be really awesome if you cleaned up the lines, and perhaps used bolder ones.

5 minutes? You should spend more time on your art :C There's a lot that could be improved here, especially in the face. The eyes are actually going in different directions it seems, and do not line up on the face. Anyhow, it is very cute, but I think if you took your time and studied how the face wouold be put together, it would come out a lot better.

Oh man, the face on your cat boy OC is gorgeous <3
I gave you a watch on DA!

Yes, you're right about the chest. And that has bothered me too. I guess I was going for a mor fem-boy look so I decided to leave out muscle def. on his pecs and it ended up looking odd :/
HAH! Me too XD; thankyou n__n

Heee, I love his eyebrows n_n very cute, and action-y. The energy sword is prettty kickin too!
I agree with Amy that the lower hand could use some further definition, and if the right leg was facing the viewer more I think it would look more dynamic.
I think you should make the background suggest a lot of motion, or use bright eye catching colors

This is a pin-up page for a book I'm working on. It's called "Candy Coated Love" and it features various male pin-ups, all based on flavors of candy. This guy is Peach Ring.

And here's another one, though he wont be part of the book.


Yeah, dragon/monster boys are a massive kink for me. HAH.

These were both colored with Prisma Color markers, which I'm very new at, so I'm not too great yet.

Constructive crit is more than welcome!

Ah, and here's a link to my DA account: http://squeedgemonster.deviantart.com/

wrooong forum, you want to go here: http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/requests-and-commissions/f.82/

You should add some more color value in the hair and the clothing where there should be shading, to give the picture more depth. I also noticed the eyes seem to be looking in different directions and the left eye should be angled down a bit to match the right eye.