Something a bit different, take a listen......

[Original Caviel]

Something i produced in the studio the other day, let me know what you guys think please, many thanks!

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[Original Caviel]

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[Doofius Maximus]

Don't bump your s**t in the musician's forum. This is a slow forum so there's no need for it.

Now I'll address your music...
Really thin beat, not enough bass, your spitting is pretty slow at first, once you started spitting faster it sounded a lot better.

The notes for the composition are actually pretty good, I'd say you did a good job on the melody for the most part but it could use a lot more bass driven lines, maybe change up the melody a tiny bit during certain parts. It's not that great until around the ending, you need more parts that surprise the listener, but make sure you surprise them in a good way. You should change up the main sound effect for the lead synth, and maybe add a high ambient line just to give a sense of airy sound.
Keep up the work, and push yourself to be better as much as possible.