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Hey guys! This is my first time doing a cover - Rolling in the Deep by Adele biggrin
Please please please give me constructive feedback and comments cos' I really want to improve on my singing (:
Sorry if you don't like my cup btw haha.

Hope you guys like it! Thanks so much!

Steph.

That's a cup? I thought it was like a surfboard or something. xd .I like your cub btw. I also love your voice wink . I think you should add instrumentals of the song or if you play an instrument you can play the chords or something just to bring out your voice a bit more, because in the background I only heard what I think was a fan going on or something. You should definitely make another cover of a different song smile
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That's a cup? I thought it was like a surfboard or something. xd .I like your cub btw. I also love your voice wink . I think you should add instrumentals of the song or if you play an instrument you can play the chords or something just to bring out your voice a bit more, because in the background I only heard what I think was a fan going on or something. You should definitely make another cover of a different song smile

Hahaha yup it's my cup biggrin It's cute right, lol (:
Thank youuuu ^^ Yea i actually play the piano and I'm planning to make a proper cover with my playing and singing after my exams when I get some free time xP Hahahah yup it was the fan in my room lol sweatdrop

Thanks for your suggestions and your time ( I'm probably doing Skyscraper by Demi Lovato next hehe <: )! Glad you find it pretty okay (:
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Thank you soooo much! c: Glad you loved it! yum_puddi
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I think you did an excellent job for your first cover! Make more!
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I think you did an excellent job for your first cover! Make more!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it (: Hehe thanks for your encouragement I'm currently learning new songs to make more covers! whee
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(If this is a style choice, then just ignore this) I would say work on breath control where sometimes it felt like you cut a note short to breathe, just to tidy up the edges smile

All in all though, a solid rendition and the pitch was great! 3nodding
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(If this is a style choice, then just ignore this) I would say work on breath control where sometimes it felt like you cut a note short to breathe, just to tidy up the edges smile

All in all though, a solid rendition and the pitch was great! 3nodding

It's not a style choice emo I have a pretty short breath >< Thanks for your feedback and advice! I'm working on that already (:

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(If this is a style choice, then just ignore this) I would say work on breath control where sometimes it felt like you cut a note short to breathe, just to tidy up the edges smile

All in all though, a solid rendition and the pitch was great! 3nodding

It's not a style choice emo I have a pretty short breath >< Thanks for your feedback and advice! I'm working on that already (:

I have to deal with the short breath too, so I can relate smile The more you sing though, the better it gets, so I'm sure it'll stop being an issue if you keep on practicing! mrgreen
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This was pretty good. When you say 'deep,' you're kind of shooting it way in the back of your mouth, making you kind of sound like Cher, you don't need to go that far back. The breath support was a little iffy, but this is a rough song for that.

Overall..It was pretty good. 7.5/10
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This was pretty good. When you say 'deep,' you're kind of shooting it way in the back of your mouth, making you kind of sound like Cher, you don't need to go that far back. The breath support was a little iffy, but this is a rough song for that.

Overall..It was pretty good. 7.5/10

It's Chinese redface Do I sound weird when I speak/sing in English? sweatdrop

Ahh I see... I'll take note of that! THANK YOU SO MUCH for your feedback! 3nodding
I really appreciate it a lot (: Have a good day!

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