i wrote some songs but i need some info if they are good

are they good

yep	0.0%	[ 0 ]
ok	25.0%	[ 1 ]
nope	75.0%	[ 3 ]
Total Votes:			[ 4 ]

[doctoriceandfire natsu]

You’re gone
You are there
Then you’re here
Far away
Now near
You start
And I couldn’t talk so
I wish I did
becase now you gone



I found out you wear
Dating her
And now it herts bad
Oh your timeing
Your timing


Whyyyyyyyyyyy
You have to go
You where awesome
I loved you the moment
I saw you
I wish I could see you again
But no your gone


that is my first one if you want the next one here it is




I’m show I’m tell I’m gide I’m fallow your ways I’m your help
We are out here fallowing our minds but we’r lost
We were told to go here but now were gone and lost
Now were together were breacking the rules
Love is in the air
me and him
Her with the auther
Danger at every coner
Now death nooooo
Why???
I’m show I’m tell I’m gide I’m follow your ways
We are gone ther and now home
It is beening destroyed
We are too late
As we go to our new home
One stayes where one died
I’m show I’m tell
Only one love left
And he is still alive
Everything has gone wrong
I wish they were here it is bountiful
If only we could all live
Not have to save one another
And we could all live
I’m show I’m tell
And we are together forever
I made falts
he forgives
Our kits have a phosise
Hanging over there heads
They must forful
I will not rest
good by
for now
but never forever my kits <3

[Dark Light Death]

Haven't exactly analyzed this but from what I can tell, you may want to spell check everything first...

[doctoriceandfire natsu]

Dark Light Death

Haven't exactly analyzed this but from what I can tell, you may want to spell check everything first...

if you are refering to kits then no that is not wroung i have this from reading warriors and this is from a cat's point of view so nope

[Dark Light Death]

becase
herts
timeing
fallow
ther
beenin

Are those all on purpose?
I don't understand.