Ugly Words
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Ugly Words
Ehhh, I didn't really like it...
Sounds like something from Animal Crossing to me...
Kinda boring, very simple instrument effects. You can tell that it's all software presets.
The best advice I think I can give you, because I don't really know what kinda genre you're shooting for, is to be your own worst critic. No song should only take one day to make. One song should take months to completely finish, or at least that's how I feel about the music I make, because I'm never happy with my music until I've worked on it for like 5 months or longer.
Obviously I don't mean to work on it every day for months, I just mean you should work on it when you feel inspiration, but don't limit yourself to one day of making music, because you might feel different about it in the future.
Edit:
And I just listened to the other track, and you don't know how to sing.
You're singing out of your nose. Learn how to sing from a chorus teacher or something, because that was probably the most nasally voice I've heard in a long time.
you must be new around here.
cool
as many of the old regs know, I most often d**k around with various genres and make sound experiments. not necessarily songs i intend to ever play or do anything with, but just to try techniques (in that case, bossa rhythm) . as for the 2nd song I'm not a good singer,and extremely nasal (almost as bad as dylan) but to be fair,this that track was not sung /recorded properly at all. (due to it being made at around midnight)
Singing correctly
Lolololololol
Calling me new. I'm not trying to come off as offensive, I'm just being honest. I could've been a lot more critical but I had to go back and edit quite a bit.
I've been here since 06, (SECSY was my old account) I just don't post often because most people who post in here don't know what they're talking about at all.
The only time I do post is when I'm trying to help people or get feedback on my stuff, and that doesn't happen very often because I'm busy with real life.
And I stand by what I said before.
Don't release something unless you feel it's worth releasing and feels finished.
(early 04 here, don't recall your other name)
That's just your opinion, but I release a lot of scraps/unfinished/ non produced stuff, showing off new composition techniques i learned, and asking what people think of it musically . Bossa Nova Scotia Osha wasn't a piece to be part of anything other then try composing in another style. (bossa nova) it may be stock synths but it's musical content is still fine. (despite me being lazy and not making turnarounds)
the other track was inspired by beach boy harmonies, but I ended up deviating from that idea, and added a french like major melody over basic rock chords. production wise it may be awful, but musically (as far as rock goes) i'm happy with it. Only changes I would make would be a non root note bass line, and some chord substitutions.