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Eirein
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Eirein
Mmm. The "Most scariest creature ever" thread just gave me an idea. Other than to be redundant to the point of wailing my cries for word count, I mean. But first! Schoolwork.

I still haven't settled on the gender of my main character, nor what my story is going to be about. But then, I can throw out the issues of having genders altogether and call it something fancy..."Tales from a Genderless Loser", or something catchy. lol ...ah, that smiley makes me want to eat an ice cream sundae.


Ohh, I did that with a book once. I tend to do that a lot and then I think, "I shouldn't, seems how almost all my charactes are genderless". I don't know why but I just love the concept of someone not having a gender.

You should go for that, it's really fun writing without a gender.


I did try it before with one of my characters, but it became hard to refer to them as "it" constantly. It seemed almost like I was lowering their importance, or making them less than human. I know I could have explored these topics in my book, but it was getting hard to go on, so I went the cheap way out and allowed my character to switch to the male gender. Do you know if I could do something to help this?


Well, with me I hardly ever refer to my characters as "he" "she" or "it" so it didn't really affect me much. So instead of saying "he" I just explained the action that was being preformed. It really depends on how you're writing it. Like first person, it's fairly easy to create a whole story of genderless characters. Third person is a little tricky, but you can explain things based on personality. Like, personality traits, or things that they do. If they're a smoker for instance, you can refer to them as "the smoker" when absolutely needed. Normally, I just use actions to describe things, though. If you want to say "It walked toward the door" you can describe it by saying what kinds of shoes it was wearing, how it walked, what it sounded like, etc. (anything that will contribute to description, everyone walks differently) If you described your character, and your characters personality has been strong before this point then it won't be an issue.

I'm really bad at explaining, so sorry.


Nono, this is very helpful. Basically, I have to work more on "showing" what they're doing, instead of "telling" what they're doing. I normally start writing without any idea of what my characters are like, except for their general personality and purpose, so this would be hard - but I think that if I pushed myself to describe more, things will be easier later on.
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Productive things 'Rea has done today:

Finally get past that one area in Mario 3 where she was stuck
Wrote 347 words gonk
Eirein
Nono, this is very helpful. Basically, I have to work more on "showing" what they're doing, instead of "telling" what they're doing. I normally start writing without any idea of what my characters are like, except for their general personality and purpose, so this would be hard - but I think that if I pushed myself to describe more, things will be easier later on.


Glad I could help. I'm the exact opposite, though. I never really know what a story is about, and I always create genderless characters until I read it over and decide I should put it in, just so it doesn't make my pieces all seem the same. I find that if you know who you want them to be, but don't have an image in your mind of what they look like right from the start it helps a lot.

Indeed, pushing yourself will get you good results over time.
Anrea
Productive things 'Rea has done today:

Finally get past that one area in Mario 3 where she was stuck
Wrote 347 words gonk


Well it's good to know you've had a productive day.
347 words is more than 0. I've only gotten just over 500 today. But I haven't really been dedicating myself to it, and I actually have a real excuse. My house is full of people on the weekends, and it's difficult to concentrate on something.
I have consumed a liter of Mountain Dew, torn open the pad of my left thumb, lurked around Gaia a lot, and written 2005 words. O_o

So aside from the thumb thing, it's been a good day.
Ayasugii
I have consumed a liter of Mountain Dew, torn open the pad of my left thumb, lurked around Gaia a lot, and written 2005 words. O_o

So aside from the thumb thing, it's been a good day.

How'd you manage ripping open the pad of your thumb? O_o
hiriyou
Ayasugii
I have consumed a liter of Mountain Dew, torn open the pad of my left thumb, lurked around Gaia a lot, and written 2005 words. O_o

So aside from the thumb thing, it's been a good day.

How'd you manage ripping open the pad of your thumb? O_o
Accidentally cut the dead skin layer last night, then when I was getting my lunch I snagged the little dead-skin flap on something and riiiiiip...

Now I have a bandaid on my thumb, and am thankful that I don't use that one on the spacebar. 3nodding
Ayasugii
hiriyou
Ayasugii
I have consumed a liter of Mountain Dew, torn open the pad of my left thumb, lurked around Gaia a lot, and written 2005 words. O_o

So aside from the thumb thing, it's been a good day.

How'd you manage ripping open the pad of your thumb? O_o
Accidentally cut the dead skin layer last night, then when I was getting my lunch I snagged the little dead-skin flap on something and riiiiiip...

Now I have a bandaid on my thumb, and am thankful that I don't use that one on the spacebar. 3nodding

Umm.... okay? neutral Never happened to me before, hope it never does.
Ayasugii
hiriyou
Ayasugii
I have consumed a liter of Mountain Dew, torn open the pad of my left thumb, lurked around Gaia a lot, and written 2005 words. O_o

So aside from the thumb thing, it's been a good day.

How'd you manage ripping open the pad of your thumb? O_o
Accidentally cut the dead skin layer last night, then when I was getting my lunch I snagged the little dead-skin flap on something and riiiiiip...

Now I have a bandaid on my thumb, and am thankful that I don't use that one on the spacebar. 3nodding


One, you just made me want Mountain Dew SO bad. And two, I feel your pain. See, our toaster is broken, and the part that you press down has come off, and now there is a single sharp piece of metal sticking out. So, I use my thumb still (because I'm a trooper, even though my family has figured out how to not kill yourself while making toast) and there was this HUGE hole in my thumb, like I could put stuff IN my thumb. There was a huge piece of plastic stuck in it too. >_< It's my spacebar thumb, but i use the side of it now.
There's still another liter left in this bottle. 3nodding I've been nursing it.

The initial slice was the result of me fumbling while trying to remove the cover from the shaving end of a fresh razor, so if you're not a klutz or you don't shave your armpits, it shouldn't happen to you. xp
Ayasugii
There's still another liter left in this bottle. 3nodding I've been nursing it.

The initial slice was the result of me fumbling while trying to remove the cover from the shaving end of a fresh razor, so if you're not a klutz or you don't shave your armpits, it shouldn't happen to you. xp

I only use disposables. sweatdrop
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hiriyou
Ayasugii
There's still another liter left in this bottle. 3nodding I've been nursing it.

The initial slice was the result of me fumbling while trying to remove the cover from the shaving end of a fresh razor, so if you're not a klutz or you don't shave your armpits, it shouldn't happen to you. xp

I only use disposables. sweatdrop


Those things can do a lot of damage, I know from experiance 3nodding
Anrea
hiriyou
Ayasugii
There's still another liter left in this bottle. 3nodding I've been nursing it.

The initial slice was the result of me fumbling while trying to remove the cover from the shaving end of a fresh razor, so if you're not a klutz or you don't shave your armpits, it shouldn't happen to you. xp

I only use disposables. sweatdrop


Those things can do a lot of damage, I know from experiance 3nodding

I don't have the money to support a perm. razor and I'm always careful. 3nodding However, when I get a job I'm losing those things for good. xp
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Jobs are good...

Speaking of which, can anyone settle a diagreement between a friend of mine and me? She says working at a library is volunteer work, I say it pays. Anyone know who's right?
Ayasugii
There's still another liter left in this bottle. 3nodding I've been nursing it.

The initial slice was the result of me fumbling while trying to remove the cover from the shaving end of a fresh razor, so if you're not a klutz or you don't shave your armpits, it shouldn't happen to you. xp


Ha, I took a trip to the store. I hardly ever drink pop, but when someone mentions mountain dew, or old school cherry coke I need to have some.

Oh well, I'm quite the klutz. One time I broke my leg by calmly walking up the stairs. I was kind of embarassing when I was getting the cast and they asked me how it happened. But they're use to my weird stories that result in broken bones.

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