NaNos Unite! Summer WriMos is here!

[Eirein]

radioactive alchemist

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

Yep, it's the update box. Don't worry about it that much - many other sites out there are far more painful to browse through.

Sigh. I would change it, but that would mean editing the background picture...*goes to edit anyway*

Okay, I fixed it. Is it better?

In reply to RA, Eirein

Yes, it's better, but it still looks like this.

Congrats on the wordcount. smile

[radioactive alchemist]

Eirein

radioactive alchemist

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

Yep, it's the update box. Don't worry about it that much - many other sites out there are far more painful to browse through.

Sigh. I would change it, but that would mean editing the background picture...*goes to edit anyway*

Okay, I fixed it. Is it better?

In reply to RA, Eirein

Yes, it's better, but it still looks like this.

Congrats on the wordcount. smile

Thanks. (And to everyone else, too).

Oh well, I don't think I can crunch the title over any farther, so I guess it'll just have to stay as it is. You and your damned screen resolution! Grr! They should have put in a fist-shaking emoticon instead of that talk to the hand one. sweatdrop

[Eirein]

twisted Yessss. We small resolutions shall one day bring the development of the web to a screeching halt!

[radioactive alchemist]

We're on page eleventy-one! xp

Wow. I got ahead of myself last night and wrote over 2,000 words, effectively freeing up my schedule from typing until Sunday. Of course, I'm going to try and stay ahead since Sunday is shopping day. Goodwill, here I come! xd

[Araia.Naishi]

Ack. I won't be able to do a lot on Saturday. Stupid flight.

I didn't write any yesterday. gonk

[Birdbrain]

I didn't mean for this to happen really. They were going to get over eachother. DANG IT.

Quote:

“Look, I wanted to apologize about earlier today,” She looked at him but he continued to watch the waves. “What you said, about me not being there for you was true.” Aaron looked at her now and she bit her lip. He didn’t answer, but just looked at her.
“Aaron…”
“It doesn’t matter. I was just angry,” he said quietly.
“It would have been so much easier if you had gone to Williards with me. I always missed you so much, Aaron. I almost think that if I had the chance to do everything again, I would stay with you,” she was crying now. “I wish I could have been there for you like you were for me. Whenever I came home there you were waiting.” Here was another one of Cecile's mood changes.
Aaron reached up and ruffled his hair, unsure of what to say.
“Aaron…Are you even listening?” she asked, quietly. He looked at her and she looked back. He nodded and bit his own lip. He leaned forward, unable to control himself, and kissed her. She seemed surprised at first, but then kissed him back. He could feel her tears on his cheek, still wet.
It started to get dark and she collapsed into his arms, sobbing uncontrollably. He just placed his chin on her head and held her until it was too cold to bear being outside.

Rawr. Rawr. Rawr. (And I'm to lazy to double space ninja )

[Tatu]

That's really good! I like it.

Yeah, I may be offline for a while because my computer's internet kinda got fried on me during a thunderstrom. At least I didn't lose my story for the WriMos. I would have killed myself! gonk lol, yeah... stare

[radioactive alchemist]

Alert! Alert!

I changed my little WriMos banner to link to the 4th chapter (now the 1st), which is now up in the Original Stories/Prose subforum! Yay!

[Eirein]

radioactive alchemist

Alert! Alert!

I changed my little WriMos banner to link to the 4th chapter (now the 1st), which is now up in the Original Stories/Prose subforum! Yay!

Now I must leave the comfort of this forum to dwell within the ghettos...

The first noticable comment & crit is that it's well written, but you keep on using their names, "Scott", and "Kitt", which slows down reading a bit. A'course, you have two males, so you have to put their names in to avoid pronoun confusion...for a first draft, this is good.

I'm just suprised that Ty's real name is Troy. That's the name of my talking garbage can, subject of my last NaNo.

I think Mr. Tittles would enjoy the story; he's into romance, adventure, Atlantis, and things like that.

@Birdbrain: It's a cute scene. I like the name Cecile; it's neither flashy, nor yooneek. smile

[radioactive alchemist]

Eirein

The first noticable comment & crit is that it's well written, but you keep on using their names, "Scott", and "Kitt", which slows down reading a bit. A'course, you have two males, so you have to put their names in to avoid pronoun confusion...for a first draft, this is good.

Gyah. Yes. I went back and read the first couple of paragraphs, and I see exactly what you mean. I'll have to change that eventually.

[Eirein]

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

The first noticable comment & crit is that it's well written, but you keep on using their names, "Scott", and "Kitt", which slows down reading a bit. A'course, you have two males, so you have to put their names in to avoid pronoun confusion...for a first draft, this is good.

Gyah. Yes. I went back and read the first couple of paragraphs, and I see exactly what you mean. I'll have to change that eventually.

As the NaNoers would say: that's for September! =P

I was just inspired by a thread (on submitting stories, no less) to write, and now have typed 200 words - my first bits since the start of June. crying I'm so happy.

[radioactive alchemist]

Eirein

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

The first noticable comment & crit is that it's well written, but you keep on using their names, "Scott", and "Kitt", which slows down reading a bit. A'course, you have two males, so you have to put their names in to avoid pronoun confusion...for a first draft, this is good.

Gyah. Yes. I went back and read the first couple of paragraphs, and I see exactly what you mean. I'll have to change that eventually.

As the NaNoers would say: that's for September! =P

I was just inspired by a thread (on submitting stories, no less) to write, and now have typed 200 words - my first bits since the start of June. crying I'm so happy.

March, actually. That's what NaNoEdMo is for. lol

[Eirein]

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

radioactive alchemist

Eirein

The first noticable comment & crit is that it's well written, but you keep on using their names, "Scott", and "Kitt", which slows down reading a bit. A'course, you have two males, so you have to put their names in to avoid pronoun confusion...for a first draft, this is good.

Gyah. Yes. I went back and read the first couple of paragraphs, and I see exactly what you mean. I'll have to change that eventually.

As the NaNoers would say: that's for September! =P

I was just inspired by a thread (on submitting stories, no less) to write, and now have typed 200 words - my first bits since the start of June. crying I'm so happy.

March, actually. That's what NaNoEdMo is for. lol

lol Silly people with their papers covered in red ink...

Aww...Why join the rest of NaNo when you have September? Winging it alone is always the best way to go. Just look at Deadalus and Ickarus!

[LotusflowerDoom]

My sister just told me that I should edit as I go, because that's what she does on her essays. However, I just looked at her, and told her #1, it's NaNo WriMo, and I have a deadline, and #2, that editting is the fun(sarcasm) part at the end.


AUGHH!!! Character development is like a stone stuck in my shoe: It just annoys me and never works its way out. I'll save that for editting.

rofl

Sarcasm

[radioactive alchemist]

Rawr. Because I'm bored, and to distract you all, I put chapter two up. domokun