What do you think of this picture?

[Bretagne dans la lune]

As far as composition anyway- and I really wanna know what people think of my hair, see if I should do it more often whee
(I might be doing a photo shoot for some ladies' portfolio)

[theyearofglad]

It's...okay. Looks really posed and unnatural, and the contrast/lighting is bizarre. And I don't really like the hair. Nice shirt though.

[Sniper19]

The hair is interesting, but if you are doing a spread for a mag. look at the camera! I feel that you are to depressed to do anything confused , but that would be me judging you from your looks. As to the hair as I said it looks good. I can't do anything with my hair as I cut it short all the time, and thats how I like my hair. neutral

[Blitzkrieg Beauty]

The picture itself just looks like it's really bad quality.

If you want the antique, dirty look, use a really good camera, and put a light filter on it.

This just looks like it was taken with a bad camera, and the pose is really unflattering for her. It makes it look like her arms are huge, or smashed up against the wall. Try the same pose, only not facing forward.

And the hair looks like you didn't wash it for a few days, and put it in pigtails because you had to run to the store.

[Bretagne dans la lune]

Blitzkrieg Beauty

The picture itself just looks like it's really bad quality.

If you want the antique, dirty look, use a really good camera, and put a light filter on it.

This just looks like it was taken with a bad camera, and the pose is really unflattering for her. It makes it look like her arms are huge, or smashed up against the wall. Try the same pose, only not facing forward.

well it's not like i had anything to do with that part, i meant more along the lines of the colors.
but thank you.

and i don't think my arms look big sad

[T o m o r r o w]

the hair looks tangled and matted
like its unbrushed and greasy
i dont think i like that display of appearance
if you want your hair curled at the end dont turn the bottom into a dreadlock

but you are a lovely specimen

[Blitzkrieg Beauty]

britterbuggin

Blitzkrieg Beauty

The picture itself just looks like it's really bad quality.

If you want the antique, dirty look, use a really good camera, and put a light filter on it.

This just looks like it was taken with a bad camera, and the pose is really unflattering for her. It makes it look like her arms are huge, or smashed up against the wall. Try the same pose, only not facing forward.

well it's not like i had anything to do with that part, i meant more along the lines of the colors.
but thank you.

and i don't think my arms look big sad

It's really the angle you're at. Try drawing your arms closer to your body, or wearing either a sleeveless, or slightly longer sleeved shirt.

They look squished, because you have them a little too far from your body.

And, remember, eye contact sells a picture. I'd love this picture if you were looking dead on at the camera.

[Bretagne dans la lune]

Dragon08281991

The hair is interesting, but if you are doing a spread for a mag. look at the camera! I feel that you are to depressed to do anything confused , but that would be me judging you from your looks. As to the hair as I said it looks good. I can't do anything with my hair as I cut it short all the time, and thats how I like my hair. neutral

it's not for a magazine...
she just did some color practice with these...
she's going to be doing some stuff for her portfolio with a better camera.

and I'm not depressed, it's more a premise for her work... thematically it's "when you're strange"

[undercitykitty]

nice shirt ^_^ smile

[Bretagne dans la lune]

Blitzkrieg Beauty

britterbuggin

Blitzkrieg Beauty

The picture itself just looks like it's really bad quality.

If you want the antique, dirty look, use a really good camera, and put a light filter on it.

This just looks like it was taken with a bad camera, and the pose is really unflattering for her. It makes it look like her arms are huge, or smashed up against the wall. Try the same pose, only not facing forward.

well it's not like i had anything to do with that part, i meant more along the lines of the colors.
but thank you.

and i don't think my arms look big sad

It's really the angle you're at. Try drawing your arms closer to your body, or wearing either a sleeveless, or slightly longer sleeved shirt.

They look squished, because you have them a little too far from your body.

And, remember, eye contact sells a picture. I'd love this picture if you were looking dead on at the camera.

good to know, thanks for the feed back! I'll remeber that for when we take the actual pictures, these were just practice for some rough ideas

[Bretagne dans la lune]

T o m o r r o w

the hair looks tangled and matted
like its unbrushed and greasy
i dont think i like that display of appearance
if you want your hair curled at the end dont turn the bottom into a dreadlock

but you are a lovely specimen

well i'm sorry as to the quality of the picture... but my hair was actually very nicely curled and shiny and well brushed and polished that day stare beyond that thank you for finishing with a compliment.

[Bretagne dans la lune]

undercitykitty

nice shirt ^_^ smile

thank you heart

[Tute Sweet]

It's not great, to be honest.

The pose is really bad, and the general theme is the kind of thing you can find on any kids Myspace page.

You should really start over, and try and do something a bit more original and imagnative.

[Blitzkrieg Beauty]

britterbuggin

Blitzkrieg Beauty

britterbuggin

Blitzkrieg Beauty

The picture itself just looks like it's really bad quality.

If you want the antique, dirty look, use a really good camera, and put a light filter on it.

This just looks like it was taken with a bad camera, and the pose is really unflattering for her. It makes it look like her arms are huge, or smashed up against the wall. Try the same pose, only not facing forward.

well it's not like i had anything to do with that part, i meant more along the lines of the colors.
but thank you.

and i don't think my arms look big sad

It's really the angle you're at. Try drawing your arms closer to your body, or wearing either a sleeveless, or slightly longer sleeved shirt.

They look squished, because you have them a little too far from your body.

And, remember, eye contact sells a picture. I'd love this picture if you were looking dead on at the camera.

good to know, thanks for the feed back! I'll remeber that for when we take the actual pictures, these were just practice for some rough ideas

As stupid as it's going to sound, you should watch America's Next Top Model.

It'll help you a bit.

[chao fan jiaozi]

I think your hair would look way nicer out of those long pig-tail things and with volume and some nice curls! : D