Fanfictions?

[La Chocolate Bliss]

I will read and comment/review on your Harry Potter fanfiction, if you do the same to mine. smile

My fanfiction

[X_of_Pentacles]

It's interesting. I'm not the biggest fan of the Malfoy/ Slytherin-dark wizards thing you have going. Despite the title, the plot does seem to be taking on an emotionally abused Harry Potter rather then neglected canon Harry Potter.

[La Chocolate Bliss]

X_of_Pentacles

It's interesting. I'm not the biggest fan of the Malfoy/ Slytherin-dark wizards thing you have going. Despite the title, the plot does seem to be taking on an emotionally abused Harry Potter rather then neglected canon Harry Potter.

Well i'm not that into the series, I was assuming that from the post-war view, and since the kids are just carrying on the stories that their parents told them, most of kids do really think Slytherins/Malfoy's are evil.

Though later in the series their opinion will change.

And what do you mean by emotionally abused Harry potter?

[X_of_Pentacles]

La Chocolate Bliss

X_of_Pentacles

It's interesting. I'm not the biggest fan of the Malfoy/ Slytherin-dark wizards thing you have going. Despite the title, the plot does seem to be taking on an emotionally abused Harry Potter rather then neglected canon Harry Potter.

Well i'm not that into the series, I was assuming that from the post-war view, and since the kids are just carrying on the stories that their parents told them, most of kids do really think Slytherins/Malfoy's are evil.

Though later in the series their opinion will change.

And what do you mean by emotionally abused Harry potter?

Harry potter was acknowledged on some level. I live with someone who was raised in an era where children were seen and not heard. Taunts, ignored, and shunned? Yeah, that's emotional abuse. I don't doubt Harry Potter, with all his positive attributes, would have acted differently the moment he got a letter had the Dursleys done more then just work him from sun up to sun down.

[La Chocolate Bliss]

X_of_Pentacles

La Chocolate Bliss

X_of_Pentacles

It's interesting. I'm not the biggest fan of the Malfoy/ Slytherin-dark wizards thing you have going. Despite the title, the plot does seem to be taking on an emotionally abused Harry Potter rather then neglected canon Harry Potter.

Well i'm not that into the series, I was assuming that from the post-war view, and since the kids are just carrying on the stories that their parents told them, most of kids do really think Slytherins/Malfoy's are evil.

Though later in the series their opinion will change.

And what do you mean by emotionally abused Harry potter?

Harry potter was acknowledged on some level. I live with someone who was raised in an era where children were seen and not heard. Taunts, ignored, and shunned? Yeah, that's emotional abuse. I don't doubt Harry Potter, with all his positive attributes, would have acted differently the moment he got a letter had the Dursleys done more then just work him from sun up to sun down.

Ah, I see what you mean.
Well I also took it from the point that nowadays, kids are much meaner and more spoiled then they were during the 90's. So I kind of Incorporated that into the fanfiction, and made it that she got bullied frequently as a kind in the 20st century would.

[Premys]

Right, your formatting needs some work first of all. Did you write this on notepad and make the linebreaks yourself?

I always read stories using 1/2 story width on fanfiction.net, and using those settings your formatting looks absolutely terrible and is hard to read.

Also, I'm not sure if I am all that fond of your idea. It is so far into the future from the canon story that it is hard to feel any connection to it. At the very least you could have used surnames that have already been established in the canon in order to give a sense of continuity.

[Lieller]

I like this story actually. I think it's something I'd definitely read more of, anyway, even if others seem to disagree. I guess it's all based on individual opinions though.