Ema Darkbone - underweight, speshul wand, senseless nickname, high skill in "necromancy" (in quotes because that's not how necromancy works - and does it even exist in HP?), from an aynchunt pureblood family (thousands of years old!), sorted into the "Vampire Fang" house of Durmstrang (does Durmstrang even
have houses?).
Stella - 1. Hogwarts skirts are NOT that short, and 2. Underage girls flashing zettai ryouiki like that make me really uncomfortable.
Salem - a catgirl with a magical girl wand. Oh, and she's also one of the artist's
headmates - so, other-self-insert?
Emmanuelle - she's NOT A MARY SUE despite being shoehorned into the sixth book as a guide for Harry Potter. Right. Also, if she's not supposed to be a love interest, why make the cover art for your fanfic look like something from a smutty romance novel?
Elodie - what part of "cat OR an owl OR a toad" do you not understand?
Mikael Wolf - 135 lbs + 6'3 = underweight.
Holland - A cat OR an owl OR a toad. NOT A PENGUIN.
- James Potter Jr. - Dragons wings and tail + Japanese symbol on pendant = what the crap?!
Moar to follow.
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