♪ Music of the Moon ♪

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Darkness. A blanket of darkness.
Tearing your friends to shreads.
The moon plays it's music.
Tearing your mind to shreads.
To shreads, and you fall..
And see the stars
Spell out they're names.
FATE. And the moon plays it's music.
Tering your friends to shreads.

-the end-

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While I'm waiting, I'll post another poem.
This one is called: Shivers
It could also be a song

Shivers:
The air is cold
(So cold, so cold)
The moon is bright (so bright) (so bright)
The phone rings
at 5:AM
and it wasn't you.
It was THEM.
THE SHIVERS
They're give you the shivers...
Beating down on eyes...
The voice inside their minds...
Guess what?
HERE WE ARE!
Shivers

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Next poem: (SONG)

falling:
I shouldn't be falling
Not when the darkness tears them all to shreads
I should be running to your house
and calling the police.
(police, police!)
HELP!
Fredrick, where ARE you, oh -Ooh!
It's time...
We're falling...
I was calling the cops.
But now, t's too late.
They got us.
Now we're falling.

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I'll write more. Feel free to post you'res too

BATTY (a folk song)

Scre-e-e-e-ech
THE CAR STOPPEd
My mind is a ticking watch.
Tick tick on the time bomb that is my brain.
TIck-click, give the second hand a flick.
It's broken ag-ain
My mind's so batty!
Screeeeee!
Like when they go in the belfryyyy!
BATS
Bats

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M o r e N i g h t M u s i c?

S is for thew scream in the night
T is for the terrible
O is for the open-surrender
P i for the po-nautur e'oj.
STOP!
Beinga villan of the night,
just STOP
filling small means with your fright.

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More poetry:
Wanhhhh.....
Yells the ghoul in the krip...
Yaaaahahh...
yells the gho-ost on the whire

Just saying <3