Japanese: Is this correct?

[Some Kind of Angel]

If I want to say something like... "Come to my house this weekend"
Is this correct?
うち に しゅまつ に きます。

[Nytyngayl]

I'd put しゅまつ に first, but that's just me.

Also I'd probably make it a question, but only because that's politer. And it would actually sound like I'm talking to another person.

[008ken_ichijouji]

I would say: あなたが今週末に私の家に来ませんか？　（あなたがこんしゅまつにわたしのうちにきませんか？）

[008ken_ichijouji]

I think when asking someone something like that---making plans/suggestions for a plan---that you are supposed to use the negative verb form... Kinda like "Wouldn't you like to come to my house this weekend?"

I could be wrong though.

[Some Kind of Angel]

ありがとう ございます。

[Isogii]

今週末うちに来ませんか？

That'd be the most basic way to ask someone to come over on (this) weekend.
Adding "anata ga" in the expression is a bit redundant since body language or even the situation indicates who is being asked.

008ken_ichijouji and Nytyngayl are right in that you turn things into a request when making an invitation (the command form is more of a command than an invitation in Japanese).

[PAnZuRiEL]

008ken_ichijouji

I would say: あなたが今週末に私の家に来ませんか？　（あなたがこんしゅまつにわたしのうちにきませんか？）

I would say: make your damn font bigger so people don't have to make special efforts to read it.

It might be (usually) fine at that size for English, but Japanese? Give me a break. rolleyes

[008ken_ichijouji]

PAnZuRiEL

008ken_ichijouji

I would say: あなたが今週末に私の家に来ませんか？　（あなたがこんしゅまつにわたしのうちにきませんか？）

I would say: make your damn font bigger so people don't have to make special efforts to read it.

It might be (usually) fine at that size for English, but Japanese? Give me a break. rolleyes

Geez, calm down. Not that big of deal. I am used to reading small font, so I don't think it's so small and no one's said anything about it for ages so it must not be such a problem to most people. If it's so much trouble, skip my post please. Didn't realize I was answering a question of yours anyway.

[008ken_ichijouji]

Fakin Pop

今週末うちに来ませんか？

That'd be the most basic way to ask someone to come over on (this) weekend.
Adding "anata ga" in the expression is a bit redundant since body language or even the situation indicates who is being asked.

008ken_ichijouji and Nytyngayl are right in that you turn things into a request when making an invitation (the command form is more of a command than an invitation in Japanese).

Yeah, I was hesitant to put in ”あなたが” since the person's probably already talking with the person, but I didn't know the situation and I was trying to come up with a situation where maybe it'd be needed. lolz

[MAGICALMAO]

008ken_ichijouji

PAnZuRiEL

008ken_ichijouji

I would say: あなたが今週末に私の家に来ませんか？　（あなたがこんしゅまつにわたしのうちにきませんか？）

I would say: make your damn font bigger so people don't have to make special efforts to read it.

It might be (usually) fine at that size for English, but Japanese? Give me a break. rolleyes

Geez, calm down. Not that big of deal. I am used to reading small font, so I don't think it's so small and no one's said anything about it for ages so it must not be such a problem to most people. If it's so much trouble, skip my post please. Didn't realize I was answering a question of yours anyway.

Only problem I have with that is reading the kanji. >w>
It's so small, you cannot really work it out.

[008ken_ichijouji]

Yeah, for some of the kanji it's sometimes difficult, especially for kanji with radicals that have several confined strokes. But often times it's generally easy to tell. Oh well.