Yomihime-Chan
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Jul 2014 17:28:53 +0000
Vannequin
And I'm glad it's helpful! I'm also glad people don't moan about it being harsh.... >w>
'Straight off after the page loads' thoughts:
- Needs some sort of name.
- the first post is good. Says what it needs to, no lies and has navigation.
- ... All your posts are different sizes, colours and layers...
You should just pick one, it looks messy.
- 2nd post starts off "I guess I should tell you about myself"... I just skip the whole post. If there is important information in there, no one will see it.
- If you're after a dream avatar, having lots of quest items is fine, but pick one, the rest should be in side quests.
As for your side quests bit at the moment... It's completely pointless. You're telling people things they already know. Go through the effort of putting things there and it'll encourage people.
- The bit with brought, gifted, anon is very nice. Keep that!
- ... I've only just seen the currently focusing on bit. You should move it over to the other side.
- Nothing really to say about the crazy quest, that's all fine.
- You have collection quests AFTER the donations...?
Why not put these with the crazy quest? I think that would work! :3
- Announcements and updates needs to be near the top.
- Needs some sort of name.
- the first post is good. Says what it needs to, no lies and has navigation.
- ... All your posts are different sizes, colours and layers...
You should just pick one, it looks messy.
- 2nd post starts off "I guess I should tell you about myself"... I just skip the whole post. If there is important information in there, no one will see it.
- If you're after a dream avatar, having lots of quest items is fine, but pick one, the rest should be in side quests.
As for your side quests bit at the moment... It's completely pointless. You're telling people things they already know. Go through the effort of putting things there and it'll encourage people.
- The bit with brought, gifted, anon is very nice. Keep that!
- ... I've only just seen the currently focusing on bit. You should move it over to the other side.
- Nothing really to say about the crazy quest, that's all fine.
- You have collection quests AFTER the donations...?
Why not put these with the crazy quest? I think that would work! :3
- Announcements and updates needs to be near the top.
I hope this is helpful and not mean... >w>
XD