Mississippi Black Velvet
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- Posted: Sat, 16 Aug 2014 01:59:15 +0000
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The twisted minion led Mara for miles and miles, heading deeper down into the shadowy places of Hell that Mara had never seen before. Mara's impatience grew as they wandered through steaming corridors and down darkened passages, but finally the imp led her to a large cave. She could scarcely make out a silhouette towards the back of the cave, but as her eyes adjusted to the darkness she realized a large and ominous figure was seated on a throne before her, a presence too terrifying to describe. Mara knew this was the man who had summoned her -- but she was hardly impressed.
Mara scoffed, "Who is this guy? I have lives to ruin, I don't have time for games."
"ENOUGH!" His voice erupted as a grating rumble that shook the stony walls of the cave. The sound was so deep and booming that it even silenced the impetuous Mara. "I have taken notice of your good work, child, but I have much to teach you and things are about to get difficult. So sit down and listen to my tale..."
To Be Continued...
Mara scoffed, "Who is this guy? I have lives to ruin, I don't have time for games."
"ENOUGH!" His voice erupted as a grating rumble that shook the stony walls of the cave. The sound was so deep and booming that it even silenced the impetuous Mara. "I have taken notice of your good work, child, but I have much to teach you and things are about to get difficult. So sit down and listen to my tale..."
To Be Continued...
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Good evening GCD! I decided to come out of lurking temporarily to make a fan thread/discussion thread for our newest evolving item, Pieces of You. Gosh, I'm loving this story already and how dark it is. I can't wait for our next evolution I'm already frothing at the mouth for what's to come and to see how this story progresses!
Please keep in mind in order for this thread to remain in the GCD to stay on topic. This is not the place to beg/buy/or try to sell either take that to the Exchange forum, thank you.
Spoons so we keep on track-
gaia_spoons What do you think of this new EI. Love it? Hate It?
gaia_spoons Speculations of how the story will go?
gaia_spoons Speculation as to who the artist is behind this beauty?
gaia_spoons Would you like to see more EIs like this in the future that take a darker turn?
gaia_spoons What are you most hoping for out of this EI? [I.E Gender neutral, gore, etc]
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Mara stood in front of the mirror, meticulously putting on the final touches of her lovely "date night" look. Tonight was a special evening, as she was celebrating her one year anniversary with her beloved boyfriend Maxwell. She packed her purse with all the essentials: phone, mints, makeup... And a kitchen knife, sharpened to a terrifyingly deadly point.
Mara met Max at a fancy restaurant, where he immediately presented her with a giant bouquet of fine white roses.
"Oh, Maxwell," Mara sighed dreamily. "You only buy me roses when you've done something bad."
Maxwell seemed startled by her teasing tone, but he managed a prompt reply, "Of course not, dear. It's for our anniversary!"
"Don't lie to me, Max darling. I followed you around last week. I saw you smiling at every girl that passed your way. I even saw you smiling at my best friend over cappuccinos yesterday. You have such a lovely smile, Max. Such lovely white teeth. I can't wait to pull them out and make a necklace out of them..."
Mara grabbed her purse and reached inside...
Mara met Max at a fancy restaurant, where he immediately presented her with a giant bouquet of fine white roses.
"Oh, Maxwell," Mara sighed dreamily. "You only buy me roses when you've done something bad."
Maxwell seemed startled by her teasing tone, but he managed a prompt reply, "Of course not, dear. It's for our anniversary!"
"Don't lie to me, Max darling. I followed you around last week. I saw you smiling at every girl that passed your way. I even saw you smiling at my best friend over cappuccinos yesterday. You have such a lovely smile, Max. Such lovely white teeth. I can't wait to pull them out and make a necklace out of them..."
Mara grabbed her purse and reached inside...
8/22
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Mara pulled the knife from her purse and lunged at Maxwell across the table. A vicious fight ensued as the pair wrestled one another to the floor, much to the horror of all the other patrons. It wasn't long before the elegant carpet was slick with blood crimson blood -- and, finally, it ended. Mara slowly wobbled to her feet to stand over Maxwell's still body, a triumphant grin spreading slowly across her face. It was only then that she felt the pain in her side; she pressed a hand to it with a wince, pulling her fingers away and glancing down. Her entire hands was sticky with blood. At some point Maxwell must have managed to grab a steak knife. Apparently, the blood slowly pooling around them wasn't only his. Mara's last thought as she slipped away was one of rage... and excitement...
... and she awoke in a very different place. Down in Hell where it was hot and foul, where shadows danced at the corners of her visionn. Mara should have felt remorse for her act and accepted her eternal punishment -- but that tussle with Maxwell was the most thrilling moment of her life. It was just so much fun! She wanted to experience that moment more... a lot more!
... and she awoke in a very different place. Down in Hell where it was hot and foul, where shadows danced at the corners of her visionn. Mara should have felt remorse for her act and accepted her eternal punishment -- but that tussle with Maxwell was the most thrilling moment of her life. It was just so much fun! She wanted to experience that moment more... a lot more!
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Mara wasn't going to let something like her death stop her from her exciting new hobby of killing people. Her new fiendish friends were quickly able to show her some tricks they'd been taught. A powerful being had shown them how they could return to the land of the living by possessing bodies and using them for evil!
And so Mara returned back to earth... with a plan already in mind. She made her way to the home of her former best friend and rang the doorbell.
Stefanie opened the door slowly, confused by the stranger who stood before her. "Can I help you?" she managed, uncertain.
Mara spoke from within the stolen body, "Hello again, Stefanie. I missed you so very, very much. You're my dearest friend! You know, I saw you hanging out with Maxwell the other day. You two looked awfully cozy..."
Stefanie's eyes widened in recognition and fear as Mara continued. "Were you trying to steal my boyfriend? Did you throw your body at him? You always had such a lovely tiny waist. I'm going to take it now." Mara smiled pleasantly as she pressed her way past Stefanie to step into her house.
Unfortunately that's all the time I have this week, but be sure to tune in next week for our next Evolving Item Report! You can see all these incredible items and more in La Victoire, and don't forget to vote in our Weekly EI Poll to let us know what your favorites are. See you soon, junior scientists!
And so Mara returned back to earth... with a plan already in mind. She made her way to the home of her former best friend and rang the doorbell.
Stefanie opened the door slowly, confused by the stranger who stood before her. "Can I help you?" she managed, uncertain.
Mara spoke from within the stolen body, "Hello again, Stefanie. I missed you so very, very much. You're my dearest friend! You know, I saw you hanging out with Maxwell the other day. You two looked awfully cozy..."
Stefanie's eyes widened in recognition and fear as Mara continued. "Were you trying to steal my boyfriend? Did you throw your body at him? You always had such a lovely tiny waist. I'm going to take it now." Mara smiled pleasantly as she pressed her way past Stefanie to step into her house.
Unfortunately that's all the time I have this week, but be sure to tune in next week for our next Evolving Item Report! You can see all these incredible items and more in La Victoire, and don't forget to vote in our Weekly EI Poll to let us know what your favorites are. See you soon, junior scientists!
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Mara continued on her murderous rampage on Earth. There were a lot of people who had angered her for even the slightest offense all the years she had been alive. Sometimes it was too boring to simply kill a feeble human, and so Mara found a sadistic joy in ruining her victim's lives before destroying them utterly.
Taking possession of other's bodies to use as her own was hard work. With each mortal body she used and discarded, her own form in hell slowly twisted into something more sinister and fiendish, until she began to resemble her demonic friends.
Taking possession of other's bodies to use as her own was hard work. With each mortal body she used and discarded, her own form in hell slowly twisted into something more sinister and fiendish, until she began to resemble her demonic friends.
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Weeks rolled by but Mara's insatiable lust for blood only grew with each passing day. Nothing she did seemed to quench her thirst for the suffering of others, no matter how violent or terrible an act she committed. In fact, torturing others for her own amusement was starting to feel a bit banal. Mara no longer felt a thrill as she snuffed out another human life, felt no rush of joy as she sent another poor soul screaming into the darkness. Her wicked work soon surpassed even that of her fiendish companions, but it no longer brought her any comfort -- in fact, Mara's new friends were starting to bore her terribly as well.
It was just like life topside, where her own ennui and disgust with the world had driven her to commit heinous acts. Except now Mara was doing something terrible every day, and she felt just as apathetic as ever. Was there anything out there that would truly slake her hunger for the misery of others?
Still, Mara clung to her rage. She refused to be defeated by her own boredom, and continued to revel in the delicious suffering of others. Her name became quite well known 'round her little circle of Hell, and so it scarcely surprised her when a small minion scampered towards her, already seemingly fearful of her presence.
"Someone is looking for you... He asks that you follow me." the pitiful creature chittered, wringing its bony hands together.
Mara contemplated for a moment as the minion hobbled a few steps away from her and then paused, waiting for her to follow. Finally, she decided that it couldn't be any more boring than what she was already planning to do that day. With her curiosity somewhat piqued, Mara deigned to follow the imp.
It was just like life topside, where her own ennui and disgust with the world had driven her to commit heinous acts. Except now Mara was doing something terrible every day, and she felt just as apathetic as ever. Was there anything out there that would truly slake her hunger for the misery of others?
Still, Mara clung to her rage. She refused to be defeated by her own boredom, and continued to revel in the delicious suffering of others. Her name became quite well known 'round her little circle of Hell, and so it scarcely surprised her when a small minion scampered towards her, already seemingly fearful of her presence.
"Someone is looking for you... He asks that you follow me." the pitiful creature chittered, wringing its bony hands together.
Mara contemplated for a moment as the minion hobbled a few steps away from her and then paused, waiting for her to follow. Finally, she decided that it couldn't be any more boring than what she was already planning to do that day. With her curiosity somewhat piqued, Mara deigned to follow the imp.