i got a few pre-writes, i want you people to tell me what you think, i have a three part rhyme... i just want some feedback here we go
PART 1
yo i got these three nines they like to find
you hoes who aint got no flow, i bring it to ya dome
im like the ******** tyrannasaurus rex bitin into my prey's necks
and when i flex, im havin extramarital sex with a hot b***h you'd like to meet
ayo you probly perplexed, cuz my specs are too complex
im squeezed between two decks like a buildins from the project
and then i ******** explode like a sticka c4
im like the trojan horse, i sneak in and release the prisoners of war
now its somethin you cant ignore, i handle you with rapport, then i go to war
im so hardcore i ******** killed the secretary of war, stuffed his head in a bag
you ******** f** wearin ya nametag baggin bags for old ladies at stop n shop
my flows are ill like cough drops, breathe in the eucalyptus and hack up the loogies
its my duty, to take care of you hoes actin snooty, and when im off duty,
i sleep like sleepin beauty
i rock booty, then i spark up a phillie it aint no dillie
i got this philly gilly ima pass it to billy oh really shits gettin hilly
im gettin down with lilly yo pass that strawberry philly
this way, you skippin the rotation
this is my least favorite of the three, i like the next one better, and the third one the best. lemme know what your thoughts are, and feel free to analyze o.O