Okay, first of hi.
I am a new fanfiction writer, and having never completed any stories in my life time I was wondering if I could get some one to read my First sort of real fanfiction, I have my own character and everything . I usually write fiction Genre: magic, adventure, romance, ect. and my friend suggested I try This.
So basically an overview is it's a naruto fanfiction, consisting of Semi Norada, (Name pending.) Naruto, sasuke, and sakura. I know so many people have written in this anime/manga line, but it was the first story that came to my head. So I was wondering if anyone would like to check out the first sort of chapter, and tell me what they think of the writing style, not so much the grammar, as I know I'm terrible at it. Many would be cringing even just reading this. So Ah, If you'd like I could send you a PM, and maybe get a few opinions on it.