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Yes. A million times yes.

It makes my English major brain want to split in half.

It doesn't exist anymore though, so thank God someone had the sense to delete it.
Shizuko Rin's avatar
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I would never ever post things I have written back then right now.

The plot is horrible and the character personalities are poorly written not to mention all the mistakes and plot holes. I did post a story a long time ago that I would like to re-write though just because I believe I could do better with word usage and sentence structure, *shudders* Re-reading it, the story makes me want to vomit >_<
Reili Takamara's avatar
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Everything was god awful. It brings me to tears everytime.
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It's still up on ff.net and it's one of my best (and creepiest things I've ever written).
Tamas's avatar
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My first was a self-insert Naruto fic User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

I'm so glad I never posted it anywhere. If it's still on a hard drive somewhere I will have to burn it.
Actually I don't think so. I think it would prove that my writing has improved, the first one I can really remember is a Pokemon fic when the first season was being shown how Satoshi and Pikachu switched bodies

I was like 10-11
My first fan-fiction was about Naruto. The sentences were cheesy and just plain awful. I deleted it about half a year ago.
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Oh, hell! Everything I wrote prior to laving high school was such crap! I think I would die of embarrassment if any of it were to be posted now. I was so bad I can't even read it now. I cringe at just the first lines.
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I deleted it from my account, I promised my readers that I'd rewrite it though cuz they seemed to enjoy the story for some reason
Self-insert fanfic about my friends and I getting sucked into the Avatar: The Last Airbender world. It was pretty terrible, but I wish I still had it so I could look over it and giggle.
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I'd rather not speak of it.
Awful self-insert Mary Sue type of thing. Blechh.

Don't know where it went, though. Probably got deleted with the viruses.
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Actually, the first I wrote I put a crapshit of effort into, re-read the 6th harry potter book again and had my friend beta it, and it's honestly a lot better than my second (mainly because of OOC characters in my second that I need to fix). The first one...it was pretty good, 22 pages of a solid buildup for a relationship between hermione and ginny, and I'd written like three pages just in planning.
And then I gave up on it.
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I still have my first one on my computer. I tried to read it and I literally started laughing. I couldn't believe I wrote that. xd I improved somewhat though so I'm happy about that. I have posted 2 already that were recent, but I was actually brave enough to post the second one I ever wrote. Seriously that one was just bad... Just compare these two from the links below.



One of my first Advanceshipping fanfics.


Ash x May fanfic #2
Yes, would definately be ashamed to post it.... kindof perverted. Back then the person I wrote it with had a thing about weird fanfics, and I just wanted to write. It was a Black Cat fic, with Sven and Eve being a couple, but the person and I made it so that Eve was well in her twenties so that Sven wasn't written as a um . . . well creeper.

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